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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-01-09 04:51 PM


Jackie's World

Come one and come all.
Spend some time in Jackie's world where there's guaranteed fun for all.
Much better than Knott's Berry Farm or Disneyland.
Let her take you by the hand and transform your life into her sensual wonderland.
She offers many exciting rides and attractions.
Every possible sort of magical fun and heart thrilling action.
Fascinating kisses providing tasty satisfaction.
And might I add a roller coaster ride you will probably never forget
until you ride her ferris wheel and find yourself alone facing the fading sunset.
And you realize you have no way of knowing where this wheel is going.
And I wonder how long it will take you to decide
you no longer enjoy this ride in Jackie's World.

Jameslee@January09,2000
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mysoul.



[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-09-2001).]

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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-01-09 10:43 PM


Oh.....
Sometimes a little anger really does cleanse the soul....and friends who really care will always listen.....


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


CocoBaci
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2 posted 2001-01-10 12:49 PM


JAMES, as you may know, those rollercoaster rides can be quite something to say the least and I thank you for the read PoetFriend

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-01-10 03:13 PM


Thanks Sunny and Coco...yes roller coaster rides can be lots of fun but when they end abruptly you find yourself wanting more...James
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-01-11 01:25 PM


Try again...James
mark woolard
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5 posted 2001-01-11 02:39 PM


BAH!   Who needs the rides!  I hang out at the dunk tank!
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6 posted 2001-01-11 02:46 PM


James~ sounds like you needed to do some venting.......hope you are feeling better..... -SEA
Paula Finn
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7 posted 2001-01-11 02:53 PM


AWWW hon...roller coasters are fun for the few minutes you are there...but I'll take a stroll along the beach anyday...hugs to you darlin

Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules?



Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-01-11 02:57 PM


I enjoyed the mixture of sadness and happiness and I'm ready for a vacation!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-01-23 04:41 AM


Thank you Mark, Sea, Paula and Kathleen for visiting Jackie's World...Paula I do believe that stroll on the beach would be much more relaxing and enjoyable...James
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