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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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his nagging muse hasnt left him but nonetheless has been suppressed by others deemed important as he sits in at stuffy lectures that has absolutely no relevance to life and the real world as he sits and struggles to understand the mysterious complexities of organic chemistry he wonders why his interest--the one that keeps him going, isnt ranked a higher priority in his life but automatically relegated to the backwoods when more pressing committments assualt |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...but second only in the number of posts here in open 12. Great poem  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kaile, Enjoyed the read. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
kaile, you will never be second not with that type of thinking! write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Another first page entry! LOL...good job Kaile! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kaile~ Wonderful write Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, You are doing what many have done before you, "paying their dues" to get from point A to point B. Let your second interest sustain you but pay attention to your studies also. Hang in there my friend! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you, hoot_owl_m SY, im delighted you did kethry, what a sweet reply...does wonders to my (already bloated) ego...HA!  sunshine, glad to feel i have done this well tracie, thank you for reading dennis, am i being whiny? sigh...i thank you for faithfully following my ramblings, offering me advice, showing me support...your kindness is much appreciated... thank guys..this was written on the spur of the moment...the temptation to be the second person with a post in open#12 was apparently too great...LOL will hopefully come back to work on this when i have the time... thanx all |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i was just wondering if anyone can help me out with the title...i have been thinking but am at a loss at to how to name this piece... any help is appreciated.. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Priorities are sometimes changed by demands Just because something's on the back burner, doesn't mean it won't heat up again. I know how this feels (How about a poem on the complexities of organic chemisry?) Liz |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"backwoods sanity"  thats my title suggestion! school days.......you been writin ditties on your notes again havent you .... lol hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
now thats a wondeful idea, elizabeth...i will think about this and see if i can come up with something dg, you are sooooo good with titles..i think i shall title this piece as such..thank you... [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 01-26-2001).] |
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