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I Am ---- Serenity's challenge
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I Am ---- Serenity's challenge |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~I Am~ I am always wishing for loves moonbeams I am ever thinking, in lost daydreams I am ever faithful to many a cause I am analyzing, "to thine own self be true" I am blue sometimes, but calgon takes me away I am happy to write and happy to read I am wondering if passion is for songs and playwrites maybe it's for you and for me to find our place in the sun BloomingRose |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rose, this is different, very good, but you might want to check out the challenge format that Janet Marie posted in the challenge forum. Keth  Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 You are a rose bud who is maturing always.I do love your growth in poetry.... Bob <>< |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Kethry ~oops, now "I Am" turning red. I did not know about the format from JM. I am usually hoping online and off. Always on the go... will check it out in a bit, and thank you Bob~ Thank you much |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi, you may not have answered in the format required but nonetheless, you have some great lines here..i particularly agreed with your sentiments about finding yourself in verse...thats why we write, yup.... loved this line i am analyzing "to thine own self be true"  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am always wishing for loves moonbeams I am ever thinking, in lost daydreams I am ever faithful to many a cause I am analyzing, "to thine own self be true" ===================================== I don't care that you didn't use the format because this was wonderful. Nothing wrong with putting a little twist into it to fit the writers personality. I loved the whole poem my friend but the above really stuck with me and sounds just like you as far as I know it. Lovely read. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Don't you worry about format--this is fab--and I thought it cute to hear that a "blooming rose" was turning red..lol..there's that passion showing! and yes, I think Passion is for all of us... Nice write, m'friend! |
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