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slipknot
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-12-15 04:41 AM


With all my might
I try and try
bringing me to the point
I wanna cry
to make a difference
to give my life meaning
but time after time
it seems my life is a hinderance
to everyone else
I just want to be known
what does it feel like to be recognized
life is a big push and shove
I just want to be loved

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-15 04:46 AM


This poem is penned with the beauty of the down side which always makes me think that poets are related to the blues somehow... you will be loved everyone finds that out eventually....these words of appeal come from the plaintive arts.....good write!!
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