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Tony Abbot
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since 2000-11-18
Posts 209
North Wales,UK

0 posted 2000-12-12 07:07 PM


Time

Time, too much,too slow,
Yet when I want you to last,
You leave me too fast.


Youth

A story so old,
Too much spirit in their eyes,
To learn from the wise.


Echoes Of Her

So hard to forget,
She lingers like stagnant smoke,
From a cigarette.



'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
1 posted 2000-12-12 07:10 PM


bravo. I loved the read. Great job.
Love and light,
Richard

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2000-12-12 07:17 PM


*giggling* the last one had me giggling. These are really good, my friend. I love it when you do these. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


FlyHigh
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84
Bekkestua, Norway
3 posted 2000-12-12 07:27 PM


Woooo. Good ones. Rock on.

--
"Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish."
Ovid (BC 43-18 AD)


kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
4 posted 2000-12-12 09:42 PM


Oh I loved these..especially the last one.
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