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in a place where love was buried
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in a place where love was buried |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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in a place where love was buried-- we resurrected the dead. dancing to the ancient song you held me close-- dont let go... a whisper. feeling your body pressed against mine... dont leave-- stay. what is real, what is alive is within my grasp. hold me just one more time. we will laugh together hearing it echo. touch me once more and i will give in; the helpless of the hopeless... to taste the sweetness of your lips to touch...to feel...to know... the resurrection of the dead-- did you see? -dgvarner (been in the attic again lol...) feb '89 < !signature--> "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Keep cleaning the cobwebs out of the attic. I enjoyed "the resurrection of the dead--" |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, very nice piece... just love that attic.  Parker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The attic inspired a very nice poetic work from your mind and heart.....very enjoyable! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dg~ This is amazing.....I felt every memory, the ache, and I heard the wish......... -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's amazing what you'll find in the attic dg. . . this is no exception. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
dg, Thanks for digging . . . you just never know what you will find. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
inot2b..thanks! so glad you enjoyed!parker..thanks love you like to spend some time in my attic with me??  et..thanks friend poet..a very sweet reply from you sea..i thank you for reading..and feeling it!  enjoy hearing from you sven..its interesting thats for sure, what i can find in my 'attic'! lol some of it is scary haha!!..  thanks for reading! so..not to screw it up for ya'll..lol but this one actually happened in a graveyard (ie: where love was buried..) and we did dance...on a huge old tree stump..to our own music.. anyway...just a memory drip... hugs, g |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- i remember this one..i do, i do..lol oh how i wish i could come wander around that attic of yours...bury myself in your poetry for hours on end...i miss being able to do that.. btw...did i mention...i LOVE this one.. love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
DG... just promise us you never close the doors on that attic of your's as a treasure you share here from a time ago has this reader enjoying the expression in your poems.. coco |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, this is outstanding work, really and truly excellant. You just keep clearing out that attic, these are fantastic, and you knew I'd say that I know. Still my mam used to say you can never tell people to often that they are love and admired. Because you can never tell in this world what will happen. Which is true, isn't it. So I shall continue to applaud and cheer as often as I can. (Which is another reason I'm writing my Songs Of Passions I want to tell you all how great and admired you all are )Take care Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
yes.. I would... love attics... love to explore you trunks. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
lone wolf..you must have snuck in there last time i was typing sorry i missed you..thanks so much for your reply! yes..digging can sometimes pull up some goodies tricks..well, ya know..you just come visit anytime..all my books are here you can read at your leisure!cocobaci..thanks friend poet..glad you enjoyed..i'll leave the doors open bubbles..yes..your mam was right--you can never tell what tomorrow may bring..i appreciate your praise and admiration!! many thanks bubbly one!parker..but i dont wear trunks--DOH! you meant THOOOSSE trunks! oops.. teehee... my trunks are yours for the exploring! lol hugs, g |
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