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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-12-06 03:17 PM


Does she like me?
                              Does she hate me?
            Does she even care?
                    Does she know my name?
    What is she thinking?
                        What does she think of me?
                What do I think of her?
        Is she taken?
                          Is she interested in being taken?
  Should I ask?
              What will she say?
                            No?
          Yes?
                  What then?
      What to do?
                      What to do?

KM


Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


© Copyright 2000 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
1 posted 2000-12-06 03:19 PM


A mind lost in the frustration of Passion.
Very nice.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
2 posted 2000-12-06 03:25 PM


no-one is quite so good at driving us nuts as us.... well done...
Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
3 posted 2000-12-07 12:32 PM


Dragonpoe- thanks for reading.

Local Rebal- that they do, that they do.

KM

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
4 posted 2000-12-07 12:36 PM


*sigh* hard lessons that can only be answered by asking. Good luck. This was really well written. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2000-12-07 02:54 AM


Ask me ask me......this is great...this is just great...all the wonder all the doubt of a new relationship

Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings



Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
6 posted 2000-12-08 12:22 PM


Startime:  Thank you, your kind words are encouraging.

Paula:  thank you.

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


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