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snowpants
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0 posted 2000-12-01 08:13 PM


Looking back
On the time gone by,
I have done everything
On my own;
All of my goals
Were achieved alone.
As the seasons continue to change,
I am finding that all those years
Of doing it by myself
Have come to an end.
I don't want to be alone anymore;
I don't want to do it all
On my own.
I want to experience
All that comes my way
With you there,
Seeing all that I will see.
I don't want to do anything
Unless we're working at it together.
It's all so simple.
For the rest of my life,
We will exist as one.
There is nothing I will go through
Without you.
Each day of my life
Will find you by my side.
Never go away from me;
Always know that I will be
Waiting to taste life
Along with you.


'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-12-01 08:36 PM


(sigh) never give up the dream...it will come to pass one day  
Aimster
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2 posted 2000-12-01 11:26 PM


kris~

wow another "gift" from your pen.
you are spoiling me this evening  
nah seriously sweetie, this is beautiful
and so touching. i hope he only knows
the beautiful person he has waiting to be
by his side. take care.
~amy~

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Aimster
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3 posted 2000-12-01 11:26 PM


kris~

wow another "gift" from your pen.
you are spoiling me this evening  
nah seriously sweetie, this is beautiful
and so touching. i hope he only knows
the beautiful person he has waiting to be
by his side. take care.
~amy~

~~~~~~~~~~
ô¿ô
o


Balladeer
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4 posted 2000-12-01 11:33 PM


This, indeed, is a true declaration of love....well penned  
snowpants
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5 posted 2000-12-02 01:12 AM


Jeffrey:  thank you!  I'm glad you could stop by.  

Aim:  awww.  spoiling you, eh?  well, now.  seriously, thank you once again, my friend, for your kind words.  I'm glad you liked it!  
-e ~~~~~

Balladeer:  it is an honor to have a reply from you!  I am glad you could stop by, too!  

'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-12-03 10:46 AM


Never ever give up on your dreams my friend.  You show alot of heart in this one and I am sure with your attitude that you can and WILL find the means to your dreams.  Excellent write from you on this one.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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7 posted 2000-12-03 10:52 AM


*sigh* I love declarations of love and this one is beautiful. I am sure your dream will come true, dear one. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


snowpants
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8 posted 2000-12-03 03:40 PM


Mark:  thank you for your kind words of encouragement.  they mean a lot to me.  I'm glad you liked it!  

Startime:  thank you!  I am glad you could stop by and enjoy!!  

sp

'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

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