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Startime
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0 posted 2000-11-29 11:27 PM


The Garden I See In My Heart
Karen Torbiak
2000

I tread carefully down rows
carefully designed by me
as I prepare my heart
for HE who guides my life

I begin my gardening by first
visiting that place left barren
where no light nor rain falls
to feed what’s growing there

My heart still weeps as I view
the thistles and the thorns growing wild
where they know I must leave them
in the wildness of lost hope

Even now I see the few wild roses
struggling to bloom as they are choked
by weeds refusing to give them
place to thrive

The ground is dried and cracked
with a grayness covering all
that would grow here
in this place where nothing lives

Shedding tears of regret I turn my back
upon this place of poison and decay
with all the memories that it gave

As I move forward I smile
at the memories
brought in the planting
of each flower in glorious bloom

The Wild Flowers come first
with myriad of colors bursting
into fields made green
by the love of the Chief Gardener

Scattered in wild array
they bloom to life
in all the colors
of the rainbow

Still some were choked
by weeds and thistles
still scattered among a garden
left to grow on its own

Bright yellow Buttercups
began to flourish
drawing the sunlight of truth
into the heart of this garden

As strength and knowledge were gained
carefully tended rows appeared
with each new flower nurtured
to bring forth its very best

Green grass flourished
in a soft carpet of lushness
as each row was divided
by rows of green showing
ground ready to receive the planting

Blue Bells sang as music touched
the heart bringing gifts
of gentle love through notes
both loud and clear

Tulips held the sweet nectar
of love from friends held
and captured and given
to all who entered in

Red Roses fill the air
with passion for life
with strength and surety
within soft petals
opened wide to catch the sun

Orchids of all design spill forth
with each new truth revealed
to show where love has touched
this garden that is may flourish

There is still much rich earth
prepared anew for planting
of life’s beauty found
amid the world

One spot in the center of this garden
is tended with great care
that when this flower comes in bloom
it will show that most rare

The Blue Rose is planted here
and waits for love to nourish
that it too may blossom to fill
this garden with rare love eternal



© Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
mutington
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since 2000-11-29
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1 posted 2000-11-29 11:44 PM


** SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL, WONDERFUL IMAGES TOO!!**
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mutington  

Startime
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2 posted 2000-11-30 09:35 AM


*grin* thank you, my friend. I am glad you liked it. Good to see you here Joyce. The people here are so very incredible. You will surely be embraced by the love that flows so freely. Hugs

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-11-30 09:46 AM


Hey Karen!!! it's so good to see you and Joyce finally here...this poem is breathtakingly beautiful  wonderful writing I see you haven't lost your touch.....ethome (e lewis true)  Remember me? I've been here a long time and this is a wonderful place to write...so glad you're here........Eric
Startime
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4 posted 2000-11-30 09:54 AM


Hi, love. Joyce and I follow each other around like two peas to a pod.*giggling with delight* I am so glad to find you. Honey I remember you well and your wonderful words that sing to my heart. You are so right this is a beautiful board with the most loving of hearts. You could visit my site to check it out if you like. Joyce has taught me so much about writing and thanks to you I have experimented a lot. Spelling is even improving. *giggling* Love to you, dear one.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

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