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Beki
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0 posted 2000-11-27 01:54 PM



On this tideless sea
my boat drifts only inches
each turn of the sun.

© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-11-27 01:57 PM


Nice picture this brought to mind.

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2 posted 2000-11-27 01:58 PM


Now I like this one....

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3 posted 2000-11-27 03:30 PM


peaceful picture shows up...

love it.

Charisma

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4 posted 2000-11-27 03:34 PM


This feels lonely......but I like it   -SEA
Beki
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5 posted 2000-11-27 05:46 PM


Thanks everyone, glad you enjoyed  
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6 posted 2000-11-28 11:19 AM


yeh, sometimes solitude is my preferred mode...love this image
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7 posted 2000-11-28 12:44 PM


glad you enjoyed Kaile  
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