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Baby Blue (for my daughter who lost her baby)
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Baby Blue (for my daughter who lost her baby) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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 ~Baby Blue~ The spring brought her pain like a wind battered rose clinging to a vine she tried to hide in the safety of denial she never noticed the soft gentle rain Devoted to the life within her, she held on to hope yet sought relief from certain grief like the last petal that falls to the ground from a fading rose the beauty was there, though wrapped in sorrow His baby blue blanket is neatly folded in a box in memory of our little one who now rest in the pillow soft arms of God We love you little grasshopper that's the nickname your mommie picked for you because you kicked in her tummy so much I know the angels sing you sweet lullaby's sometimes I think I can hear the sweet songs... We'll see you one day on heavens beautiful shore on that you can rest assured love, me maw [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The spring brought her pain like a wind battered rose clinging to a vine she tried to hide in the safety of denial she never noticed the soft gentle rain Devoted to the life within her, she held on to hope yet sought relief from certain grief like the last petal that falls to the ground from a fading rose the beauty was there, though wrapped in sorrow ============= Deb, this is one of the most well done, beautiful verses I have read on this so very painful and difficult subject. My heart, thoughts and prayers goes out to all of you in this loss. I have been there...I understand the pain..you have written her a healing, loving verse, that in time she will treasure. take care jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ *Heart-Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BloomingRose, This is very painful and so much love and emotions all in the one poem. I am sorry to hear of your daughter's loss. Give her your love through these hard times. Let the angels take care of the little one. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Be Rosie......My wife and I also lost two....baby gals....I do know what's going on through the minds of your entire family, and I pray for you all....It's hard to be strong for your daughter I'm sure....but it's essential that you are.....I hope and will pray for healing for you all....I know I'm just that damned old Toerag, and God probably kinda chuckles when I pray, but as infrequently as I do, he usually knows I'm serious when I do.....Bless you and your daughter.....my best goes out to ya..... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
jm~ Thank you. My daughter lost her baby in the summer. He would have been born in December. God has a way of healing the worst of the hurt, but he will not be forgotten. I wanted to write this now because I know the birth that would have been, is on her mind too. Marge~ Thank you  Daniel~ Thank you for your very kind words Toerag~ Thank you. You really touched my heart with your words, knowing you and your wife have suffered the same loss. I am sure God hears your prayers. He loves us all the same, and cares when we hurt. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is a pain that I know only too well. My heart goes out to your daughter. You have written a heartfelt and beautiful tribute to little grasshopper. He is now safe in God's arms and waiting until he can be with all of you again. Hugs and much love from me to you and yours. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is so sad, so loving, and so incredibly beautiful. *Hugs* to you and to your daughter. *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Startime~ Thank you for your kindness in reply, though it may have brought painful memories for you. I am very sorry about your loss. I am glad that you know that the little ones are safe in heaven and one day there will be a wonderful meeting. Take care, Deb |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Alwye~ I almost missed your reply. Thank you so much for your kind words and the hugs. Deb |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
There is no pain like the loss of child...its unnatural...but sometimes God needs them more than we do...we ust have to believe He has a reason for sharing them as long as He does...hugs to you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So sad that life is like this sometime...you have written beautiful words for her...take care..James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very touching and beautifully done, Deb. I'm sure this will bring comfort to her for the rest of her life. HUGS to you all. Denise |
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cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
My prayers are with you, I lost a nephew in Dec.,1989, and am still trying to get over the lost,he is constantly on my mind, but I know that he is with God and is looking down from heaven. Take care, and send my prayers to you daughter. Cathy Marie Bohannan |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Paula~ It does seem unnatural to lose something as precious as a child, especially when the child is wanted. God sometimes allows us to go through the things in life that are painful, but he is never the cause. I don't really understand it but I know Jesus carried every pain, every heartache we have ever suffered to the cross. I am so glad to be able to turn to him in times like these. Thank you for your very kind reply. James~ Thank you, I hope she will feel peace and comfort when I tell her about this Denise~ Thank you so much... Cathy~ Thank you so much for your love and prayers |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- you and your family will be in my thoughts and prayers.. hugs to you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
And children are given to us as a loan. We forget that and when God takes the child back before we are ready to let go, we question the "why". I have not lost any of my children, but it has to be the most painful of all! Love and prayers to all of your family on the little ones earthly birthday. ME |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I don't think ther is anything more heart breaking than losing a child. I'm so sorry for your loss, and your daughters. This is a very sweet piece, Baby Blue. Hugs to you and your family ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The comments above express my thoughts also...my heart goes out to you and yours... with love ........ethome |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
((warm huge hug)) I read this poem several times, and always with tears runnning over my cheeks.....I also lost my baby, though that it is allready over twenty years ago, I will always remember her. I will pray for your daughter and your family, wish your daughter and you a lot of strength...thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deb, there are no words but rest assured God hears every heartfelt sigh. Prayers and *HuGS* for you and your daughter. Keth Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Vicky~ Thank you for your prayers, I will take all the prayers sent our way, with joy and comfort motherearth~ Thank you very much for your kinds thoughts Irie~ Thank you, I am so glad so many of you have shared love and compassion for my daughter. I apprecitate your understanding very much ethome~ Thank you Charisma~ I am so sorry that you too lost a baby. I know you understand, thank you and hugs for you... Keth~ Thank you so much... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't imagine a greater agony than losing a child... This is so beautiful and loving... my heart breaks for your family. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
suthern~ Thank you very much... |
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