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LastOfThe New Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 9 |
Sleep to be Alive not seen What dreams may inspire The pen welded To your hand Attempts the wonder Of longings drive Passions only to describe The insights of every Down Time |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LastOfThe~ Welcome to Passions.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i must say that this poem is thought-provoking...let me sleep on it tonight and i will come back tomorrow Welcome to Passions!!  |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I agree with Kaile, very thought provoking. I sensed a rather dark intense strong writing of a search within. A need to go further and deeper.........I could be way off. It certainly wouldn't be the first time!Welcome to Passions! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, LastOfThe! I'm sure great inspiration comes from those down times. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
An usual and highly effective style.Hope to see more of your work. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to Passions...this is a great first write...deep and just a touch of the dark...love your name...would be interesting to find out just what you feel you are the last of... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Welcome to Passions! Very interesting thoughts expressed with this poem. Nicely written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you!  |
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LastOfThe New Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 9 |
Thanks All for the greetings, welcomes and comments. The Last Of... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! I enjoyed this......dreams bring a lot to me...... -SEA |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Oh my gosh I loved this. how wonderfully true are your words. welcome to Passions Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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