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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2000-11-25 01:17 AM


I may have had too much to drink,
Or perhaps my mind's just fried,
I bid you all good night I think,
I've yawned and stretched and sighed.

Erased and censored, with reasonable cause,
It's time to say goodnight,
No excuses, no complaints,
Not even a verbal fight.

I'll see ya all again next month,
Maybe the first of next year,
I wish you all a great holiday,
Yes even you Balladeer....


© Copyright 2000 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2000-11-25 01:21 AM


*sigh* sad, I have just arrived only to bid you goodbye. Pleasant journey my friend. Thank you for this enjoyable read.
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-11-25 04:48 AM


Toerag,
leaving so soon. You do realise that this means I'm going to have to trash stacks of Toerag poetry. I will never forgive you for that.*laughs like a drain*

Seriously though, from one mad hatter to another the party's always going even when there's no room. Come back soon and we can celebrate unbirthdays together. Hey! Come back for my birthday, Read my poem in the next couple of days and you'll know why cause nobody does it better than you  *enigmatic smile*
If you can't write on at least be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Denise
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3 posted 2000-11-25 08:29 AM


Hey, don't you be going anywhere!! You know we all love you, especially Balladeer!!

Denise

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-11-25 10:36 AM


Sleep it off and come back! You have a long holiday season, so don't disappear!!
Charisma
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5 posted 2000-11-25 11:26 AM


mm.....think that this is unfair, just when everyone made me curious to know you....oops....I ment your poetry....now you have decided to disappear for a while,...*sigh*...well I think that I must be patient till you are back.

Take care.
Charisma

Balladeer
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6 posted 2000-11-25 11:35 AM


Have wonderful holidays, Toe. Your clever and humorous poetry is always missed...

I miss the OK corral, too. Civilization can bite sometimes, yanno?  

Nan
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7 posted 2000-11-25 03:52 PM


You bein' haved there, Deer & Toe?  I'm keeping an eye on both of ya... Someone's gotta...
suthern
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8 posted 2000-11-25 11:04 PM


I know erasers have a job
That they have to do
But to make you disappear
Without me "reading" you?
Woe is me, I pout and sigh,
Stick out my tongue and sneer
Hurry back, Toe... We need you
To corral Balladeer! *G*

Sorry I missed whatever I missed. *G* And I love your goodnight... just wish that goodbye stuff wasn't necessary. *S*

Toerag
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Ala bam a
9 posted 2000-11-25 11:08 PM


Well, yassee I haven't left.....I'm not posting anymore poems for a while, but I figured if I could add one MORE gray hair to Nan's head, one more pain in the butt for Balladeer, and make Nan's eraser get a little smaller, I'd stick around and make someone elses life a tad more miserable. (As you know, it's kinda life long ambition of mine to bother people), and I'm so damn good at it!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-25-2000).]

suthern
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10 posted 2000-11-25 11:34 PM


I'm glad you're still here, sweets... though I will certainly miss your poems... and you make THIS life anything but miserable! *G*
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
11 posted 2000-11-26 01:25 AM


how 'bout that Toerag, ain't he cool?
writin' them good - byes like it's fuel!
bumpin' that poetry with his passion --
givin' his greetings in -a- dosed ration!  

how 'bout that Toerag, he's mighty sumpin'!
rhymin' and meter and all that bumpin'!
writin' 'bout holidays! wishin' and praisin'!
givin' great lines while passions are raisin'!  

how 'bout them Toerag! he's got the timin'!
hittin' the forums here with those rhymin'!
how to be a Toerag? don't know the answer?
getchyerself some po-et-tree! post it here and dance-r!  

happy holidays, mister... nice to seeya!

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- all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry -

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 11-26-2000).]

Temptress
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Mobile, AL
12 posted 2000-11-26 01:37 AM


Geesh..I see your name, and get to read about how your poetry was deleted. Geesh...I was soo looking forward to reading what you wrote. YA TEASE!! Geesh....Now I hafta go pout.. SEE?? *POUTS*    
suthern
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13 posted 2000-11-27 09:23 AM


A fine "them poems" contribution from Doreen... and maybe Temptress and I can start a pout club? *G*

You're far more understanding and forgiving than I could be if a poem I'd written and not saved elsewhere was deleted and thus forever lost. *S* Hurry back, sweets... I miss your words and your goodness... and your badness! *S*



[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-28-2000).]

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