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How it Began
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How it Began |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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How it began Placed upon a window sill Yellow with a leafy frill A little plant a flowered prize. That captivates the human eye. Given me with heart and zeal In tender touch and tender feel. Placed within my hand her hand That made my heart to beat the band. It was there and then I knew The hand to hand to me the clue. The offer of the water can It was there that it all began. And it flowers to this day A prize to me in every way And I water it each morn Just before the light of dawn. Just before I kiss the face The face that put it in its place. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Bravo!!!wonderful. I love the vision of this one. What a perfect ending. Thank you so much for sharing. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Given me with heart and zeal In tender touch and tender feel. Placed within my hand her hand That made my heart to beat the band. It was there and then I knew The hand to hand to me the clue. The offer of the water can It was there that it all began. =================== This fragile gift of leafy frill when given TLC ... will bloom ever the love of until this gift of begin ... a place for love to start will grow on the vine of your kiss ... and bloom like a rose in your heart. *winkiewinkie* later-green thumb-gator  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marvelous! I see pansies and the perfume of petunias growing bright and smelling lightly...and coffee brims from the cups as early morning rises on such a tender scene... Marvelous! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really like the way you wrote this...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A very loving poem Visually pleasant and beautifully written Liz |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Seymour, Enjoyed this muchly. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, this is a very clever and well-crafted poem.... I do not agree with Sunshine...you are NOT a pansy!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, It's a pleasure to share my poetry with you. Sven, You are still the king, long live the king. Irish, Love your sensational. JM, Kissykissy winkiewinkie, Love Sy Sunshine, Thanks for the marvelous. *L* Jmlee, I really like what you said. Poeminister, Thank you for the enjoyed muchly. Balladeer, You always have a wrinkle, one of these days I'm going to iron you out. Thanks Sy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Your poetry is so elegantly phrased. This is just sprinkled with love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a love and I thank you. *L* |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I really enjoyed this Seymour ... what a beautiful weave of love and tenderness, such a wonderful conclusion. Very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, Thank you for the read and nice comment. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sometimes the simplest gifts are the ones that speak the most love...and what a beautiful beginning this must have been to carry you for so long |
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