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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Listing To Port I heard The Captain Say Without The Least Emotion In This Sea Of Pain Sargasso Like In Its Inescapability Bones Of Coffins Feed The Eyes Taking On Water Posioned With Rage Of Exhumations Feelings Blazed 'Gainst Saint Elmos Fire Lighted Masts Burn Windswept Ghosts Intangibly Real We Who Mourn Nothing |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Youre listing because of the heavy vocabulary you have on one side ...even that out and you'll be fine.....just kidding ...very well written piece I enjoyed it!! ethome |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL at Ethome!.... this is really, really good! and I'm STILL laughing at Ethome! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Bravo! well done! -Tier |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Incredible pain, or perhaps I should say this is "beyond pain". I think a more apt description. Definitely painful to read, and so I shall say, "very well written". Powerful emotions in this. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
very descriptive. . . excellent showing of the emotions here. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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