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Beyond the Pale......dedicated to the Poetic Men at Passions
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Beyond the Pale......dedicated to the Poetic Men at Passions |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Beyond the Pale Dedicated to the Poetic Men at Passions stoically he nethers my world completely unfurls my sails as he propels he prevails through the gales goes once then again beyond the pale and I would sail away with him he sights me highlights me then cleverly, wittily delights me brightens my way every day sings the song of my heart delights in my art gallantly adds chivalry to bravery takes a bit of daring puts in all the caring and I would illuminate his night I look for him I see his soul young in old a bard of gold old he’ll never be the graying is just a way to see a fantasy of haunted light and I would treasure him tenderly for his soul glows rose O do concur with me this coveted man captures poetic plan painting in motion safe harbor from ocean harbor thee my art steal command seize my hand and I would listen to learn and learn again for he’s stolen mine heart all along in the course of prairie song it’s not wrong to long to subsist like this written bliss smells sweet petals sweet smells of life and then to breath him in so to thee from whom I derive all that makes me alive for it is how you play the words that pay the tribute kind now please don’t mind me when I say you may have your way with your words as you discern they do not escape unheard or unspoken solid gold tokens from my lips to your hear hear me now whisper soft you wing me aloft and raise me again to new heights of heights finger with me the stars at night under moon’s faint light to receive sun’s delight all these the reasons be why you linger beyond the pale Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My friend you may light up my sky and range with your presence anytime. What a lovely piece of poetry from you this afternoon and being a guy myself, well, I am glad that maybe some of my words may have found their way to you and given you even the briefest of moments of a tender touch or two. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, I'm speachless, how often does that happen, I know not often. This is amazing for he's stolen mine heart all along in the course of prairie song it's not wrong to long to subsist like this written bliss smells sweet petals sweet smells of life Kari, this is wonderful. And yes I love it, oh my this is one of your best, it truly is love Majestic Marsha  (I'm still at work, but this is one of those Q times I don't like to mention.) Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea, I'm in agreement with MArk...if any words I've written have helped to spark any of these emotions or feelings, I feel very honored. What an incredible choice of words you use......  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunshine, you give honor to the men of passions with such sweet flare. This poem is wonderful to read. Parker |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for his soul glows rose O do concur with me this coveted man captures poetic plan painting in motion safe harbor from ocean harbor thee my art steal command seize my hand and I would listen to learn and learn again for he’s stolen mine heart all along in the course of prairie song it’s not wrong to long to subsist like this written bliss smells sweet petals sweet smells of life and then to breath him in so to thee from whom I derive all that makes me alive for it is how you play the words that pay the tribute kind now please don’t mind me when I say you may have your way with your words as you discern they do not escape unheard or unspoken solid gold tokens from my lips to your hear hear me now whisper soft you wing me aloft and raise me again to new heights of heights finger with me the stars at night under moon’s faint light to receive sun’s delight all these the reasons be why you linger beyond the pale ============= oh girlie this is so lovely and so way cool too.. excellent writing Sun, this is so very well done...from conception to the expressions completion... yes..they are so gifted and rare.. there is a special glow of a poetic prince.. and we are so drawn to the flame this gift from your pen goes in my keeper file thank you jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I agree with Mark and Balladeer, If any of my words have added to your treasure then it was my pleasure. You have a style of your own and this is an excellent example. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forgot to check the lil box thingy LOL and forgot to say.. very very cool title ok...Im clicking the box this time.. later-sun-gator me |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
damn!! exquisite! you've been busy, eh? lol there are, i'm sure, many passionate poetic men in these halls which could have inspired this work and the way you have written it is fabulous! good job, poet friend.... we are truly blessed to have such wonderful poets and friends here, aren't we? you are, of late, taking your writing to new heights, karilea... i'm enjoying everthing i've read by you |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I must agree. . . truly artistic. . . I am indeed honored to be included with such fine men as we have here at Passions. . . I hope that my work has spoken to you as much as yours has spoken to me my friend. . . thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply Beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gentlemen: so many men...so little time...to thank you all for your rhyme...may it please, may it ease, your soul, the goals, the squeeze of heart, by you to impart to us, the women of Passions...we thank you... Gentlewomen: the time of grateful, the time of great, to listen to men, who will relate, a time a place a song of grace, to be the one, to have begun a song, a dance, a chance at romance, who leave their heart, upon a sleeve, to give up the air of pretendese... I think, gentlemen, that I am right, that you see YOU here...and I also think for the women, in part, or in whole, that we appreciate your soul... do enjoy the best of you, that part that travels through the times of worst, to the times of best, lest we not ever see the swell of chest, the beat of heart, the prime of man...for you ALL do it...as no one can. I hug you all...[and thank you for peeking in...{~,^}]< !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-22-2000).] |
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