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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-11-20 05:14 PM

The beauty of your soft blue eyes
The touch of your blonde hair
Reminds me of the lightest skies
The smell of heavens air.

Softness in your timid voice
That warming sense I feel
As if I really had a choice
My heart you had to steal

You had me from the very start
No other had control
That you and I are one in part
More than I’ve yet to know

For my blood flows through your sweet veins
The essence of my life
And in my heart a key contained
A fathers love that’s right
For an eternity

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 11-20-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-11-20 05:52 PM

Nothing sweeter than the love of a father that is willing to show it so openly. Excellent write from you and I just know that she is going to love it as well as you for it. Nice to see a poem such as this in here.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-11-20 08:20 PM

Rich, I'm glad you posted this one...it's a bit different now, yes? I love this one...shows the beauty of your spirit! Hugs.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

3 posted 2000-11-20 10:58 PM

Thank you Mark.
Serenity It's different the one I had shown You much more how I feel. First time I've ever written a poem for my daughter. Hope she likes it.
Thanks,
Rich

Rainydays
Member

since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

4 posted 2000-11-20 11:13 PM

How could she not like it, Rich?

It's beautiful.

"The beauty of your soft blue eyes
The touch of your blonde hair
Reminds me of the lightest skies
The smell of heavens air."

The smell of heaven's air...what a totally original and lovely line! This poem is to be treasured, Rich. Thank you ~

Rainydays

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2000-11-20 11:19 PM

spiked-
   this is so lovely..
   your daughter is very fortunate
   to have a daddy who loves her so much.
   beautiful write.

   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2000-11-20 11:20 PM

Rich...this is so sweet...a lovely way to tell her you love her...one she will cherish all the rest of her life...beautiful

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-11-20 11:37 PM

For my blood flows through your sweet veins
The essence of my life
And in my heart a key contained
A fathers love that’s right
For an eternity
============
Rich this is a beautiful tribute and testiment of a fathers love and that special bond between father and daughter.
a very sweet read for sure.
take care
jm

There are moments ...
when I Love you
beyond the limits of my human heart ...

...you will always be mine.

Collin Raye

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

8 posted 2000-11-21 12:13 PM

Thank you very much Rainyday, Vicky, Paula and Janet Very nice to be seen like it was meant to be

Lloyd
Junior Member

since 1999-06-16

Posts 17
Torquay, Vic. Australia

9 posted 2000-11-21 01:24 AM

There is so much to like about what you have penned, Rich. Thanks for sharing it with us. Its a bit special !!!

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

10 posted 2000-11-21 07:51 AM

Thank You Lloyd
Rich

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