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Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion

0 posted 2000-11-21 12:03 PM



Grief

The act of missing you,

an ache for phantom limbs
the burn of vacuity,
nerves
at aberrant end,

and not
a single kiss
left behind.

© 2000 Corinne Bailey

© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-11-21 12:09 PM



Corrine-
   oh yes..you have described it well.
   i can feel the pain and longing in this.  
   i like it much.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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2 posted 2000-11-21 03:38 AM


Corinne, you have always been a writer of amazing works, and this is no different...

My regards,
sudhir...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2000-11-21 07:10 AM


*sighing, knowing that feeling all too well

and wishing just a bit for that imprint to  be left behind...to hold onto


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Corinne
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4 posted 2000-11-21 08:45 AM


Thank you, Vicky, Nakedthoughts and Sudhir.

Corinne

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