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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I am breath, for beating heart I am life, both end and start I am love, found everywhere I am compassion, for you to share I am hope, in a world dark I am truth, though seen as stark I am light, the show the way I am forgiveness, when sins waylay I am peace, for all the world I am joy, with babies curled I am faith, when day is dim I am the arms that hold you in I am the one with many names Call on me, I'm still the same I the creator of everything I the one to bring offering I am your God whatever the cost I will save you when you're lost I am whispers on the breeze Reminding us that we must please A God who made the earth and sky Treats us gently, lifts us high. Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I am Impressed!! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
"I am life, both end and start" I'd like to say that was my favorite line but as I kept reading onward, most all of them grabbed me.  Clear, concise, and very well written. I applaud. Really enjoyed this one. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You are... indeed insightful... Nice one, Keth..  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, the simplicity is wonderful... you fly! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Awesome.....you are!!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, I AM AWESTRUCK, I love this one, this is another one of your very very best. Excellant work, it's so well written, with deceptive superb simplicity. Wonderful Take care Slushy Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it a lot!!!!!!!!!! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
nicely said |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone for reading and responding so kindly. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kathry, I am in awe!! Wonderful writing!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lone Wolf, as I am in awe of those around me. Thanks. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kethry: Another masterpiece bella - you do inspire me Roniece |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Roniece, thank you for the "beautiful" If my writing inspires you then all I can say is... write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Stunning! I felt your pulse write this, awesome! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Compassion, Thanks. May I say what a lovely use name you have. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well i ditto the rest and am honoured to be the one to bump this one up |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
kaile and interloper, you are ...both so kind, so generous and loving and out of your mind. Don't you have enough to do that you go searching archives "blue" Live well Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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