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Tony Abbot
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0 posted 2000-12-02 07:06 PM


So the wheel still wearily turns,
Though the cogs have started to decay,
Some err,some find their lesson learnt,
Some are just children here to play.
So many heroes will go unsung,
And so many sins will escape the law,
All torn between the shadows and the sun,
Just pray someone's keeping score.



'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

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snowpants
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1 posted 2000-12-02 07:27 PM


Very thought-provoking.  And, yes, I do believe that there is Someone who sees all.  And, as cliche as it may sound, what goes around definitely does come around.  Great write, Tony!

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Victoria
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2 posted 2000-12-02 11:43 PM



All torn between the shadows and the sun,


Enjoyed Tony..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Tony Abbot
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3 posted 2000-12-04 01:36 PM


Thanks,Snowpants and Victoria.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

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