Mounting surge of restless release Surging flows of temptation build Lover's massage rest in velvet crease Toss of ecstasy in symphony's guild
Hesitant breath filling pending gasp Clutch of nails plow fields on back Starving lips gulp in surging grasp Trace of tongue racing nectar's track ============== OH BABY..... you've been in my raspberry tea again..havent you steaming my screen first thing this morn... Mark this is so very lovely in its sensual, intense, passion. and as always ... your exceptional gift of imagery, color, and detail. this is exquisite ... your poetry is so uniquely you... it defines your heart and the way you love. love this one me
WOWZA!! Such passion and desire mixed with that lovely heart of yours makes for a beautiful and intense combination! i do believe it is a bit early in the morning for my eyes to be reading this, but i will take sheer poetry in motion at any time. beautiful!!
take care. ~amy~
Listening to every heart
Mark* Everytime I think that I have read the most beautiful poem from your pen you weave another that breaks all the boundries...this is so exquisite...I tried to pick my favorite verse but I just can't...It would be like selecting one star out of millions as your favorite...together they belong to complete the vision. Outstanding weave my friend~
Member Rara Avis
Maidstone Kent England
Mark my friend, this is full of passion, it sends a tingle, everywhere. This is seriously passionate, Oh I really really love this. What amazing images have invaded my head. I think I need a lie down. Just WOW Mushy Marsha
This is hot
Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning
SEA-as long as it is swept this way you will know that it will be treated with much love. Thank you my sweet friend.
Paula-Thank you much...glad you saw the warmth in it.
Charisma-WOW....a *sigh* and a hug. Must be my lucky day. Thank you my friend.
Martie-Please do my dear....Cowboy has two arms ya know. Thank you for making cowboy smile with natural visions
Ron-Thank you kind sir and to be added to your library is a great honor.
JM-Thank you much my dear friend, but are you sure you liked it? You know me, if I can steam a screen then I will do so with a smile on my face. Hugs baby.
Beth-Glad to wake you up that way....now does this mean that you feel like going back to bed? Thank you for making cowboy both blush and smile with your response to this one.
inot2B-Thank you so much. I take it you liked it.
Amy-The morning time is one of the best times don't you think? Glad to see you liked it and sorry if I added a little heat to ya this morning.(NOT)Thank you my sweet friend.
Karilea-I do try when I have a purpose behind it. Thank you much.
Holly-Now my friend....do you think I would ever consider limiting you to a single star? Gawd NO way my friend. You dance on as many as you like as often as you like. Hugs to you my sweet friend and butterfly.
Marsha-Thank you so much my dear friend and president. You know that I am more than just smiling to know that I invaded your head aren't you? LOL.....gotta keep the fan club proud now don't I? Don't fortget to show this one to Daphne and then whisper the following in her ear for me.(********)
Kathleen-Somehow I just don't see you teasing at all.LOL....thank you so much and yes, if anyone would know the heart of an Irishman, then I would imagine you would. I am glad to have stirred a little fire back to you after reading your post.
Mark, a very alluring title bade me read further. As I did, I found tenderness, playfulness and passion in this lovely poem. Any woman would certainly be honored to be the subject of such esteemed and sensual attention as the poem explores both the emotional and physical nuances of loving. Wonderfully written.
Mark I hope you're alright...those clutching nails well I know what they can do if they get carried away.....surging gasp...whew!! this is beautifully penned with excellent metaphors...love how it rose to a cresendo and released into a soft retire....ethome...
Member Rara Avis
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