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Mahogany Swirls

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


0 posted 11-09-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mark Bohannan






Mahogany Swirls

Mahogany swirls of auborn hair
Flowing cascades of satin blend
Dancing tangles of passion care
Clinging embrace of lust crescend

Mounting surge of restless release
Surging flows of temptation build
Lover's massage rest in velvet crease
Toss of ecstasy in symphony's guild

Hesitant breath filling pending gasp
Clutch of nails plow fields on back
Starving lips gulp in surging grasp
Trace of tongue racing nectar's track

Mahogany swirls sending fears aloft
Slashing time in created winds so soft
Rested sighs on manifest coming due
Whispers  softly spoken of "I love you"

Mark Christopher



[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 11-09-2000).]
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SEA
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with you


1 posted 11-09-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Mark~ You have outdone yourself....I  *SWOONED* with this one......Lovely.....you swept my heart away with this one.   -SEA
Paula Finn
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nicely done...very rich and warm
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3 posted 11-09-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

*WOW*....you have done it again.......*SIGH*....love it...I just love it....

((hugs))
Charisma
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Mark, beautifully done, just been added to my library. You da man.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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5 posted 11-09-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Mark--This is so rich with passion and color...I think I may swoon with Sea...I love this beautiful poem!
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Mounting surge of restless release
Surging flows of temptation build
Lover's massage rest in velvet crease
Toss of ecstasy in symphony's guild

Hesitant breath filling pending gasp
Clutch of nails plow fields on back
Starving lips gulp in surging grasp
Trace of tongue racing nectar's track
==============
OH BABY.....
you've been in my raspberry tea again..havent you  
steaming my screen first thing this morn...
Mark this is so very lovely in its sensual,
intense, passion.
and as always ... your exceptional gift of imagery, color, and detail.
this is exquisite ...
your poetry is so uniquely you...
it defines your heart and the way you love.
love this one
me

Elizabeth Cor
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7 posted 11-09-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Cor   Email Elizabeth Cor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Cor

"Hesitant breath filling pending gasp
Clutch of nails plow fields on back
Starving lips gulp in surging grasp
Trace of tongue racing nectar's track "

Yowza! This sure woke me up! Mark Christopher, this is as stimulating as it is gorgeously penned. Tender, melodious, and arousing!

~ Beth
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8 posted 11-09-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Boy today is a day of mental images. This is really an eye catcher. I've never heard of hair described in that way, it is beautiful!
Aimster
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Mark--

WOWZA!! Such passion and desire mixed
with that lovely heart of yours makes for
a beautiful and intense combination! i do
believe it is a bit early in the morning
for my eyes to be reading this,   but i
will take sheer poetry in motion at any
time. beautiful!!

take care.
~amy~
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Listening to every heart


10 posted 11-09-2000 11:35 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

you sure know how to turn a phrase....whew...
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11 posted 11-09-2000 01:03 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Mark* Everytime I think that I have read the
most beautiful poem from your pen you weave
another that breaks all the boundries...this
is so exquisite...I tried to pick my
favorite verse but I just can't...It would
be like selecting one star out of millions
as your favorite...together they belong to
complete the vision.  Outstanding weave my
friend~

Marsha
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12 posted 11-09-2000 01:33 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Mark my friend, this is full of passion, it sends a tingle, everywhere. This is seriously passionate, Oh I really really love this. What amazing images have invaded my head. I think I need a lie down.
Just WOW
               Mushy Marsha
                
This is hot


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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13 posted 11-09-2000 01:38 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Oh my word!!  I think we should change the name of Open to
Pre-Adult!
Just teasing, this is very, very sensual, what else could I expect from an Irishman!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen




[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-09-2000).]
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


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SEA-as long as it is swept this way you will know that it will be treated with much love.
Thank you my sweet friend.

Paula-Thank you much...glad you saw the warmth in it.

Charisma-WOW....a *sigh* and a hug.  Must be my lucky day.   Thank you my friend.

Martie-Please do my dear....Cowboy has two arms ya know.  Thank you for making cowboy smile with natural visions

Ron-Thank you kind sir and to be added to your library is a great honor.

JM-Thank you much my dear friend, but are you sure you liked it?   You know me, if I can steam a screen then I will do so with a smile on my face.  Hugs baby.

Beth-Glad to wake you up that way....now does this mean that you feel like going back to bed?   Thank you for making cowboy both
blush and smile with your response to this one.

inot2B-Thank you so much.  I take it you liked it.  

Amy-The morning time is one of the best times don't you think?  Glad to see you liked it and sorry if I added a little heat
to ya this morning.(NOT)Thank you my sweet friend.

Karilea-I do try when I have a purpose behind it. Thank you much.

Holly-Now my friend....do you think I would ever consider limiting you to a single star?  Gawd NO way my friend.  You dance on as many as you like as often as you like.  Hugs to you my sweet friend and butterfly.

Marsha-Thank you so much my dear friend and president.  You know that I am more than just smiling to know that I invaded your head aren't you? LOL.....gotta keep the fan club proud now don't I?  Don't fortget to show this one to Daphne and then whisper the following in her ear for me.(********)  

Kathleen-Somehow I just don't see you teasing at all.LOL....thank you so much and yes, if anyone would know the heart of an Irishman, then I would imagine you would.  I am glad to have stirred a little fire back to you after reading your post.
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Mark, a very alluring title bade me read further. As I did, I found tenderness, playfulness and passion in this lovely poem. Any woman would certainly be honored to be the subject of such esteemed and sensual attention as the poem explores both the emotional and physical nuances of loving. Wonderfully written.

Rainydays
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...Mark...
If you weren't my brother, I would come right out and tell you what kind of effect this had!!  This is really, really sensual, and soft.......as satin.......


Follow your dream!

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Mark I hope you're alright...those clutching nails well I know what they can do if they get carried away.....surging gasp...whew!! this is beautifully penned with excellent metaphors...love how it rose to a cresendo and released into a soft retire....ethome...
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Mark-
   wow..this is incredible.  
   you never cease to amaze me
   with the depths of your cowboy passion.  
   beautiful words from a beautful heart.  
   i love it much.  

   love and hugs,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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Hesitant breath filling pending gasp
Clutch of nails plow fields on back
Starving lips gulp in surging grasp
Trace of tongue racing nectar's track

Mmmmmmm...i think i like it..

                ~Victoria~



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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Mark~ I must say this is exquisite writing.
Deb
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'Mahogany swirls sending fears aloft
Slashing time in created winds so soft
Rested sighs on manifest coming due
Whispers  softly spoken of "I love you"'

Well, Mark, you've done it again.  I've been saying that a lot lately, haven't I?  Anyway, my friend, very sensual, romantic write.  Love it!!  

sp  

I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...
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Mark,
Lots of passion and embrace here. You are simply amazing, great work.



Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
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how does one pick a favorite of yours? a keeper among all....outstanding, and so beautiful.....*S*


Greeneyes


"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

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MarkB~
Oh, sweet man !

I think I likes that thar manifest thing, cowboy !  

'Rested sighs on manifest coming due
Whispers  softly spoken of "I love you"'


You're amazing !
Yep !

If poetry was measured in *swoons* ...
you've got a trophy coming ! !
Love ya', Sexy !
~*Marge*~



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