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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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My eyes are shy when you look deep into me that way. You see past the woman child into the sexy side of me. Your voice soothes my spirit with soft words. Your touch reminds me that I am more than just a woman... I am yours... On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
short, sweet, simple, good... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks Sunshine! I appreciate that much.  |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I love the way you used so few words to say so much! It's lovely! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
one thing I've always loved about your poetry - the beauty of the unexpected. this time it's brevity - excellent write D |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Debbie, thanks for the kind words. Bill, you know your insight means so much to me when I write, thank you kind sir.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GS, would that we could all look into people this way. . . Wonderful poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks Sven, when we can love this way, I think we can see deeper into ourselves. I appreciate the read. |
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