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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-10-18 10:22 PM


Birthday Wish

There are so many things
That I can wish for you
On your happy day
I could wish you wealth
And I could wish you fortune
I could wish you everything
You amazing heart could desire
But the one wish that I wish for you
Is that you can be as happy
And feel as loved
As you have made me feel.



~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-10-18 10:30 PM


What a nice poem, and such a sweet wish. Enjoyed!

Elizabeth


Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near...
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Gemini
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2 posted 2000-10-18 11:50 PM


rosepetals25-Very sweet wish from your heart, nicely done.  I liked.
rosepetals25
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3 posted 2000-10-19 01:57 AM


Elizabeth and Gemini - Thank you both for stopping in.. I'm glad you liked it.

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

EagleOne
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4 posted 2000-10-19 03:35 AM


Lovely, this is one of those I wish I'd written.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Daniel J D
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5 posted 2000-10-19 05:04 AM


Well done! Hope the wish comes true.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-10-19 08:44 PM


No better gift than the one waiting for him from you.  Beautiful and I hope the wish finds the way to reality.
rosepetals25
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7 posted 2000-10-19 09:33 PM


Eagleone - Thank you.  I'm glad you liked it.

Danial JD - Thanks for stopping in  

Mark - Awww.. thank you for the sweet reply.


~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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