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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-10-18 09:46 PM


it seems like when you hit adolesence you would do anything to be part of the 'in' crowd...

~Wishing~

wish i was normal
wish i was mainstream
just want to be normal
just want them to like me

want to impress them
make them happy
just want to deserve them
make them love me

wish they would want me
wish they could need me
wish they would like me
wish they could love me

Nikolette Sadness




i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-10-18 10:25 PM


I think adolesence is the hardest age to grow through. I'm sure many can relate to this!

Denise

ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

2 posted 2000-10-18 10:45 PM


nice piece, Nikolette Sadness ... took me back ... thanks.

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.



Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
3 posted 2000-10-18 10:56 PM


Nikolette-They will like you for you, keep being yourself, your words speak the truth that all of us have at one time or another have felt. Very beautiful poem.
Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2000-10-19 01:29 AM


AWWW honey...if they dont like who you are they arent worth knowing
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