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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Burning Flames Lovers flames are still licking at my soul As lovers hands caress and touch my heart Bejewelled with loves own drops of dew I find myself returning to the very start Before we've had time to catch our breath We spiral into the burning fires very heart Gasping for breath as the rapture blossoms Together we ride the stars high into the sky Burning heat as the flames blaze ever bright We plunge into the fire with a breathy sigh Hotter grows the dance of loves pas de deux We dive into this blissful heat soaring high Breathing once again slows it's frantic rate Heart and pulses decrease their speedy pace We smile the look of delighted contented bliss Your hand rests on me as fingers tenderly trace I can't believe your soft and tender touch Calls me return once more to passions place Marsha |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
~Marsha~ Wow!  this rocks!  -SEA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, lil' sis.....you have the romance in your soul!!! What a beautifully written love song this is........absolutely beautiful!!  Follow your dream! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, thank you, I truly thank you.   Hi you sis, You like it, mmm, well actually so do I kid, the other five, may well come demanding my soul, for the crime of desecration to poetry. Still I'll manage to keep them at bay, even if I have to use bribery. You take care, Bubbles |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marsha, A spectacle of brilliant writing, simply awe inspiring. "I find myself returning to the very start Before we've had time to catch our breath We spiral into the burning fires very heart" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* this is so romantic and so full with fire. well done Charism |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! What more can I say? Love it. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Daniel, thank you, awe inspiring, are you sure you're replying to one of my poems? Still I thank you, and I'm glad you liked it. Charisma, I'm happy you like this, and I thank you most sincerely. Eagle one, why I'm really touched, and I thank you. It must be the heat in here because now I'm blushing!! Take care Marsha |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
marsha, You've such a way with words, turning them into such beautiful pieces of romance..I'm speechless.. This is so sweet..  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
One word ...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ The muses have brought you a gift - Thank you for sharing ... 'We plunge into the fire with a breathy sigh' Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Broken Winged Angel, you are far too kind, I thank you, and I'm really glad you like this. Mark my friend, Mmmm you think so? I thought it was getting a little cool. I thought I might turn the heat up a little, now I wonder where did I leave my matches? I could have sworn I had them with me a moment ago. I'm glad you like it, (you do don't you? I thought so!) Marge, I'm honoured that you should like this, I actually do too. Which is really rare. Although I can see my sisters, baying for my blood for this one, I really can! Anyway thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Take care Marsha |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"Lovers flames are still licking at my soul" .....yeah!! i love that line so much i had to tell you RIGHT NOW!! woohoo!! ...ok..now i have to go read the rest of it... heehee  ...dg |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WAH HOO!!! WOW..and other stuff..i mean bubbles!! jeez...wish it were me!! haha!! its a good thing i didnt stop at each of my favorite lines to tell you how much i love it--i'd have so many msgs here you'd have to start a few new pages!! haha this is exquisite!! weedoggies...!! hugs,dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Oh Dee, no really, you like it then love? Actually I think I like this too. So one of you're favourite lines is it, now don't mind me love, if you ever have need of the line you go ahead and grab it. Now all you have to do is find someone who fits the bill. So if I find any likely looking candidates, do you want me to interveiw them first for you of just send them over? You know how helpful I can be Take care kid Bubbles |
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