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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Lying back, Listening to this song, So full of memories, I am taken back To when I discovered Your face. Closing my eyes, I can still feel Those brand new emotions, Those strange feelings Of infatuation, And those completely incurable Smiles of new love. Nowhere else in the world Will you find Such extreme frivolity; Such desperate eccentricities. Never before has there been And never again will there be Such fervor, Such intense enthusiasm. I find that the words Seem to flow incessantly Now that I know of you And the love you have to offer. As long as I live, I will not let go Of this number. Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SP~ I am totally blown away, this is wonderful, brought to mind some great memories.  -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sing a song eternal in the heights of noted lyrics as two lovers find the harmony that so seldom sees the baton as cresendo's halt the passing of half beats and crash down in tremors of bass in the midst of arias |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
SEA: why, thank you! I'm glad I could make you recall some good times! Mark: very impressive, my friend. You came up with that rather quickly. I must hand it to you, you are an excellent writer. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good stuff here. Funny thing is, music can do such amazing things with your memories. Right now I can't listen to the songs that I was loving the most, waiting to see him, cause it takes me back to that happy anticipation that was destroyed. Very powerful, the effects of music, and the effects of love. Good combination for your poem. Catalinamoon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ This is a neat tune. Memories are written in the heart. When love walks your way the melody begins ... sung in the heart of a new found friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Sandra: thanks! glad you liked!! Marge: thank you for your always-so-creative replies! glad you enjoyed!  sp |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
snowpants, Love it! You have done it again, it is whispers in my ears. Well written, keep that pen going. "So full of memories, I am taken back To when I discovered Your face. Closing my eyes, I can still feel Those brand new emotions, Those strange feelings" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Begining with: ~And those completely incurable Smiles of new love~ I was comepletely taken. Such excellent, excellent lines!!! Snowpants, you continue to amaze me. Each post seems to grow and deepen from the next. I just adored this. Thank you. ~ Beth |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Daniel: thank you so much! glad you enjoyed it!! Beth: wow! I don't know what to say, except thank you so so much for your encouraging comments!! I'm glad you enjoy my work!!  sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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