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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2000-09-29 11:31 PM

I believe

In long long drives
In first hugs
In softly whispered hellos
And in you

I believe

In soft summer skies
In katydids
In starbright wishes
And in you

I believe

In moonlit walks
In morning kisses
In drive in movies
And in you

I believe

In chilly mornings
In towering trees
In water trickling in the silence
And in you

And all I ask

Is you believe too

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-09-29 11:34 PM

Oh so perfect, went to see a neighbor child in Peter Pan last night, and we all clapped, young and old alike, softly whispering...I believe...

and I still do! Well done Paula!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-09-29 11:38 PM

Paula~ this is so wonderful!!! I think this would make a great challenge by the way.

-SEA

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

3 posted 2000-09-29 11:55 PM

I believe too! Asking others to believe too is not too much to ask, especially when they are such wonderful things to believe in. Great poem.

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live
our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2000-09-30 12:35 PM

"I believe

In chilly mornings
In towering trees
In water trickling in the silence
And in you"

My favorite lines because I'm a sucker for all of those things. What a wonderfully peaceful image!!
Great writing!!

sp

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-09-30 04:31 AM

Paula~
wonderful imagery in this...well done
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2000-09-30 08:07 AM

Paula, I like this style, and the happiness oozing out of every word. I'm happy for you.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-09-30 10:36 AM

Paula~
I believe in YOU !
Cause you believe in me !

This piece is enchantingly lovely.
Softly serene ... and believable.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2000-09-30 10:38 AM

Sometimes it is hard to believe but you make it sound so easy. Nice write

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2000-10-20 05:12 AM

First of all let me apologize for letting this slip away...

Sunshine...sometimes faith is all you need

Sea...just what kind of challenge?

Waverly917...well sometimes asking someone else to believe is the hardest thing to do

Snowpants...glad i could pen lines you enjoyed

Tracie...thank you

catalinamoon....thank you it was a happy time

Lady Marge...thanks for believeing

Mark...no the belief never comes easy...but when its worth it you just try harder

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2000-10-20 05:38 AM

excellent work, superb.
right from the heart, so I believe in you!

Charisma

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

11 posted 2000-10-20 01:48 PM

now how nice is this? ... well done, Paula ...

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