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CocoBaci
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0 posted 2000-10-17 01:24 PM


AnGeL DuSt

A
top fluffy clouds pitter patter is found
N
earing indigo skies amusement abound
G
ifts from heaven delivered from our God
E
ach tipptitoe sprinkles love
L
eaving traces of presence in twinkling stars

D
oves circle atop nests along sandy shores
U
ntil dust has caressed two earthly lost souls
S
weetly and tenderly these Angels dance
T
heir task now complete as new love is found

         Coco  






[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-17-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-17 04:01 PM


Coco~ this is SO beautiful.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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2 posted 2000-10-17 04:15 PM


Dani~
Just LOVELY !
I really enjoyed the sentimental sweetness in this one.
~*Marge*~



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CocoBaci
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3 posted 2000-10-17 04:27 PM



SEA->thank you sweetie for your kind reply

MARGE->I was sooo hoping you'd peak at this rhyme and I'm happy       you enjoyed it too!


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4 posted 2000-10-17 04:33 PM


CoCo this is marvellous, so adorable, and I love it.
Take care
                   Marsha

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