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Martie
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0 posted 2000-10-12 10:23 PM



I am reposting this poem...because of the need for more then my prayers...the baby is now in isolation with an infection...thank you for the power that comes from many!
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A Prayer for Life

Life is so fragile,
its delicate arm is made of velvet
and it breaths in muted cords
fluttering with the harp
cascading notes like questions
into the small space that comforts.

Nestled in a cocoon of softest flannel
I touched it today with a finger
oh so large and callused
and not nearly clean enough from scrub
to disinfect the longing that her skin absorbed
or to sponge the fabric of tears that tore me

back into another room with more tubes
and breath a machine that pulled and pushed
when all around said stop
and let the spirit that is rising go.

In that soft fingertip of love
I held my heart and prayed again
for it has been so long in coming,
so long since I prayed for life

I pray now.



© Copyright 2000 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Wilfred Yeats
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1 posted 2000-10-12 10:28 PM


and a chain of prayer will rise -mine following yours and many more to follow mine - I KNOW God hears - AND  answers unselfish prayers and this baby is no less deserving of God's love
Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-10-12 10:33 PM


Add mine to that list and it will grow...just as Bill has said.  I am getting pretty good at the prayers lately and I will not let you nor the baby down on this end.  Lovely sentiments in the verse you shared and that shows your heart.  Hugs my friend...many hugs of comfort to you and all concerned.
Denise
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3 posted 2000-10-12 10:40 PM


I'm sorry to hear this, Martie. I'll keep this little one in my prayers.

Denise

vlraynes
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4 posted 2000-10-12 10:48 PM



Martie-
You can add me to that list as well.
I will be praying for this precious
little one as well as for you and all
who are involved.  Prayer is a powerful
thing, and miracles DO happen when we
turn it all over to God.  Beautiful poem.
God bless you.  

-vicky

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 2000-10-12 11:13 PM


Heart felt prayers lifted to the heavens
tonight Martie...we love you~

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-10-12 11:23 PM


promise of prayers...
like poetry.. the words will rise above ..
they are in our thoughts...
take care sweet poet
jm

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7 posted 2000-10-13 12:59 PM


the little baby, you and yours are in my thoughts and in my prayers dear one
*hugs* to you

Maree

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8 posted 2000-10-13 01:10 AM


Martie, on my pillowcase a prayer shall be said for this lil one under God's care...
Coco  

Charisma
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9 posted 2000-10-13 04:01 AM


I will pray for your lil angel and your family, hope that everything will be ok soon.

take care  (((warm hug)))

Charisma



Dee
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10 posted 2000-10-13 05:28 AM


My thoughts and prayers are with you and yours, Martie.
God bless you all.
Dee

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-10-13 06:24 AM


Please take care Martie, my prayers and thoughts are with you and those you love.

Best wishes and prayers,
/Kit

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12 posted 2000-10-13 06:38 AM


You and yours are in my thoughts and prayers, Martie.
Marsha
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13 posted 2000-10-13 06:53 AM


Add my name to the list, I've lit a candle of hope for you and her. I hope that as the flame burns it will carry the prayers to God. Who hears and see all, it's said that the angels are there, where they are most wanted. I know that there are angels around you now, take care
                        Marsha

BSC
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14 posted 2000-10-13 08:56 AM


Keeping you all in my thoughts and prayers Martie.  God Bless, Bonnie
Robert Joseph
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15 posted 2000-10-13 09:08 AM



Martie, to the child's need, I add my hope and faith.

Robert Joseph

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16 posted 2000-10-13 09:11 AM


Martie~ I'm praying........Love to you. -SEA
Martie
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17 posted 2000-10-13 10:14 AM


For those of you who don't know...this baby was induced to be born before she was ready do to the mother's illness...she weighed 2 1/2 pounds...she has been doing well until she developed an infection...  I touched her the day she was born and it affected me greatly...thus the poem.  She is the baby of a friend.   Thank you so much for all your prayers...I will let my friend know how many are praying for her and keep you posted.
Aimster
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18 posted 2000-10-13 10:39 AM


martie~
please know my prayers are with this little one. and also with their family. they will be in my thoughts as well. my mom is in heaven and i truly believe she is an angel. so tonight and everynight till the kid is better i will make a special prayer to her and God.
Take care.
Love,
Amy


"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


vlraynes
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19 posted 2000-10-13 01:08 PM



just bringing this back to the top
for more prayers.    God bless.  

-vicky

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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20 posted 2000-10-13 04:21 PM


Martie - I searched out this poem, after reading Mark's.  I am praying for your friend's dear little one with the precious soul.  And you too, my friend.


BloomingRose
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21 posted 2000-10-13 05:32 PM


Faith is believing that all things are possible with God.
Have faith to believe, then let it rest in his hands.
Hugs,
Deb

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22 posted 2000-10-13 06:27 PM


You shall have my prayers also.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Martie
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23 posted 2000-10-13 08:31 PM


The baby's infection was caused by an I V that somehow was contaminated ...they are checking to see if the infection is systemic (or in the blood), which would be very serious, it takes 48 hours to complete the test...so your continued good thoughts and prayers are appreciated greatly....thank you!
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24 posted 2000-10-13 08:46 PM


             If We But Believe

  If we put our problems
    in God's hand,
  There is nothing
    we need understand...
   It is enough
     to just believe
   That what we need
       we will receive.

When God allows a burden to be put upon you, He will put His own arm underneath you to help.

Your baby will recover. God Bless.

kaile
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25 posted 2000-10-13 10:30 PM


i will pray with you

God Bless You

Poertree
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26 posted 2000-10-17 04:38 PM


Bit late i know martie, but better late than never. A lovely poem which can only do good, and help to channel prayers in the right direction for a happy outcome - i'm sure glad to hear things are improving ..

p

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