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Open Poetry #10

Does he Know

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

0 posted 2000-10-09 12:32 PM

does he not see the obvious
does he understand?
does he know everytime
he looks at me my heart skips
a beat
does he know that I will be there
through thick and thin
does he know
I think about him all the time
from the brink of dawn
till the end of the night
does he know that his smile
brings me to trembles
Does he know
that with out him
life just wouldn't be the same
does he know
that I will be by his side
when he feels that the world has
against him
does he know
when all the pain in the day has
turn him into an unbearalbe
humanbeing, I will be there to
make him smile
does he know...

[This message has been edited by BirdeeB (edited 10-09-2000).]

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

1 posted 2000-10-09 01:32 AM

Well, all I have to say is, if he doesn't know, you should definitely make sure he does! What wonderful expressions here!! Great poem!!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-10-09 10:17 AM

He knows, just sometimes he can't accept that someone would love him when he can't love himself. Beautiful!!!

[This message has been edited by inot2B (edited 10-09-2000).]

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

3 posted 2000-10-09 12:48 PM

such a sweet poem,thanks again

"you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings
you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything"

"so impressed with

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

4 posted 2000-10-09 12:59 PM

whether or not he knows now, telling him couldnt hurt. Speaking from a guys point of view, it always makes me feel ten times better to hear it.

Keith Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.

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