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Hoping to See You |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I was hoping I'd see you here-- I just wanted to remind you To stand atop That mountain; No need to climb-- I'll carry you up. I see something deeper In your eyes; I could swear I recognized some emotion In your voice. So, don't hesitate To cross that highway-- I've got the traffic Under control. I know how much It means to you; Don't be afraid To pursue it. My only purpose Is to see you through. The look in your eye Is more than enough Gratification. Dear love, My life is yours; Precious one, Take my heart, For it's already In your possession. I was hoping I'd see you here-- I just wanted to remind you. Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful building of warmth and trust in your words for the recipient of such devotion and love SnowPants. Very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I absolutely loved this! The affection in your words just comes pouring out! Excellent job!!! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Dear love, My life is yours; Precious one, Take my heart, For it's already In your possession. That's how love works I guess, a heart can be stolen by someone who doesn't realise they did the stealing. I hope that your love will realise they have your heart. Best wishes! Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a lucky lucky person to have such love laid at their feet...I hope they appreciate you |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Kit: thanks for the wonderful compliments! WhtDove: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you also for the kind words!!  Abra: thanks! I hope so, too!! Paula: yes, I hope 'they' see it the same way you do! Thanks for reading!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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