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The Mermaid of the deep blue sea....
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The Mermaid of the deep blue sea.... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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I see you now In the deep blue sea A mermaid now Like you wanted to be ~~~ All day long You watch the ships Come to shore Admiring the sailors From your oceanous floor ~~~ Your skin so beautiful Long flowing hair With a magical smile No sailor could bear ~~~ Your smile capture's Their heart Your beauty capture's Their soul Before they know it Your've encased them whole ~~~ Trapped beneath the ocean For millions of years Encased in the circle Of your life's tears ~~~ You are happy Enjoying the love Of the sea As for the sailors They are no longer free ~~~ So the day they scattered you Over the ocean blue A mermaid you became Your soul to renew ~~~ Your life on earth A tough one Too much to bear Mistakes made A life unfair ~~~ So the sailors Of the sea Pay a price For meeting the Mermaid so blue For she is a nymth Weaving a spell So true ~~~ Her spell will cast them To the oceanous floor Where they stay For all time Encased in her life's Tears endured ~~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very magical and dreamy poem dear Tracie, I enjoyed it very much Thank you  Maree |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So the day they scattered you Over the ocean blue A mermaid you became Your soul to renew ================ oooh I LOVE that verse... love this mystical.. magical weave you spun very cool Trac....very creative ... you could make this a continuing story... or a childrens book..with great pics ... or not *smile* (just what ya need from me...homwork) LOL  later-under-the-sea-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ What a lovely lilting tale of intrigue. Mystical magic ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So scatter me ashes among the sea so I may too kiss this mermaid. You have penned a beauty and one that will last forever in the hearts of lovers and dreamers alike. In my library under the heading of Mesmerizing Myths of Memorable Moments!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tracie* OOOOO I loved this!! Captivating from start to finish with wonderful imagery. Great work~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful my friend. . . now, where's my scuba outfit?? Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How original! This was a treat to read. Kathleen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thankyou my dear friends for reading this poem it has in alot of ways some sad memories for me as this is a story about the most beautiful woman in the world you would ever meet, she died at the age of 29 of an accidental herion overdose and she was a lover of the sea, her ashes were scattered nearbye over the ocean and I could just see her as a mermaid with her long flowing black hair and her love of the sea and her beauty in real life was one that captured every mans attention even unfortunately some who took advantage of her and in some way ultimately led to her death at such a young age. So thanks to all for reading and enjoying Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a wonderful, mystical tale of the sea Tracie ... a beautiful read, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kit~ So glad you enjoyed this thanks for reading and replyingTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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