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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-10-07 11:34 AM


This Time Will Never End


Breathing softly as we lie entwined together
I sleepily gaze in silent adoration
Knowing that I could stay here forever
Our skin damp with passions flight
Our mouths tasting of lovers kiss
I watch you asleep gilded in starlight
Wishing this time would never end

Gently you stir pulling me closer to you
Your fragrance fills my senses, lifting me
Recalling me, returning me to our heaven anew
The fires that smoulder gently simmer
Once again blaze into life, burning brighter
Your shining eyes reflecting stars shimmer
Showing me this time will never end

We dance together in passions burning fire
My soul ignites in flames of heated grace
Skin on satin skin builds the blaze even higher
Lips that move brings me sheer delight
Touch of magic, sweet feelings of joy
My lovers eyes glowing in the silver light
Telling me this time will never end


Marsha

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1 posted 2000-10-07 06:58 PM


sigh, beautiful. I had moments like that to that I wish would never end, it always does till the next time..
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2 posted 2000-10-07 07:08 PM


*sigh* why does this reminds me on times that I would never end.....

beautiful written, enjoyed reading it

Charisma

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3 posted 2000-10-08 04:54 AM


Horizen, thank you for reading this and I'm glad you liked it. Ahh but if the time didn't end it wouldn't begin again.
                          Marsha
                          

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4 posted 2000-10-08 04:59 AM


Charisma, glad you enjoyed this. Time can't help but march on, but that just means we can return to paradise again.
                  Marsha
                  


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5 posted 2000-10-08 07:50 AM


OKAY, STOP THE CLOCK!!!!!!!!!!   I don't want time to end either if it is going to be like this.  Whew.....could use a little of that myself....well lots really but I will take what I can get.   Wonderful write my friend and "PRES" appointee.
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6 posted 2000-10-08 10:24 AM


Mark, so you would like some? Mmmmmm glad you like this, it's written for a very special someone, and I only hope he likes it as much as you do.

(I'll keep my fingers crossed,) Anyway thank you for reading this and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Because I certainly enjoyed writing it.
Take care
                   Marsha
                    

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7 posted 2000-10-08 10:41 AM


Marsha-The eyes have it, very beautifully and passionately written.
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8 posted 2000-10-08 10:48 AM


Gemini, the eyes have it most definatly, glad you liked it.
I thank you for taking the time to read this. Take care
                     Marsha


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9 posted 2000-10-08 01:07 PM


Marsha~
A lovely and sensual read.
I'm with Mark ... MORE !
~*Marge*~


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Marsha
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10 posted 2000-10-08 05:51 PM


Marge glad you liked it, I seem to have been inspired lately. Mmmm I must say I'm having fun with my inspiration.
Take care and thanks for stopping by
              Marsha

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11 posted 2000-10-09 06:28 AM


Marsha...one of the most senuous poems I have had the pleasure to read for a while.

Well done!

K



"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."


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Marsha
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12 posted 2000-10-09 08:14 AM


Severn thak you, I tried my best, and it looks like it worked. Must be something in the air here, probably comes from all those fireworks?    

Take care
                      Marsha
Oh and thanks for reading this.
                                  

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