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Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware

0 posted 2000-10-01 01:32 PM


(Not great poetic form - just morning musings)

I wake early and take joy in the light.
Folding in my window announcing the day
No matter my aches I'm refreshed by hope

I turn to the window, watch squirrels and birds
Hear him sing on a branch proclaiming his love
See her scamper the phone wires
Wary eyes look at me, does she pity me here?
Confined inside and to the ground?

The branches only now are turning
The street awakens, starters cranking
Grocery bags trudge by homeward
The wail of a siren in the distance
Chug of the diesel freight rolling by

Enter the shower I feel water's healing
Cleansing my eyes of sleep's residue
Washing away dreams of night love
Caressing my fantasies of shared shower for two

With clean teeth and fresh face
Pour my juice, get my Centrum
Coffee begun, hear it drip in the pot
Trucks climb the hill, their ponderous churning
I join them on foot for the morning's first news

Breath deeply the air laden with growing
Moist earth and leaves still warmed by the sun
And I remember the day
Is another present

Greet the neighbors walking dogs
Say hello to Digger and Anastasia
They stand still for ears scratches
Watch the inchworm pacing his leaf
Sun's reaching down now
Painting the pavement
City canyon shadows
Slowing fading from sight

Yesterdays faded - when I drove in the dark
It's paid in full now, walking with ease
I can listen to the lark
And do what I please
No longer measure weeks with tankfuls
I raise my eyes, Offer simple thankfuls

Found new work but at my pace
Doing my choice -at my place
Time to think, to laugh and pray
Write my novel, seize the day
Play my music, sing my song
Live with laughter, the whole day long




~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

© Copyright 2000 Wilfred Yeats - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-10-01 01:40 PM


I'm going to be asking for a signed copy of that Novel, Mr. Yeats...no matter the topic, I'll want a copy...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Paula Finn
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2 posted 2000-10-01 01:49 PM


Oh Bill you never cease to amaze me with that beautiful mind of yours...the places you have taken me the dreams you have given me...to all this I say thank you my sweet friend
Martie
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3 posted 2000-10-01 02:30 PM


"Found new work but at my pace
Doing my choice -at my place
Time to think, to laugh and pray
Write my novel, seize the day
Play my music, sing my song
Live with laughter, the whole day long"

What a wonderful, spirit filled morning, Bill...thanks for reminding me to remember, today is another present, like your meandering mind.




In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

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4 posted 2000-10-01 02:37 PM


always such a sweet pleasure to read your words....")

GE

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-10-01 03:29 PM


Yesterdays faded - when I drove in the dark
It's paid in full now, walking with ease
I can listen to the lark
And do what I please
No longer measure weeks with tankfuls
I raise my eyes, Offer simple thankfuls
---------
this one amazing wisdom filled verse says it all so perfectly
and shows your true inner light..
wonderful uplifting read..
your musing is music to our ears
take care jm

Nan
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6 posted 2000-10-02 07:14 AM


Morning is without a doubt the very best time of day, isn't it?... You've done a wonderful job describing it here, Wil..
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2000-10-02 07:35 AM


I love the joy in your spirit and the recogntion of the gift we have in each day. Wonderfully written
Liz

Kethry
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8 posted 2000-10-02 07:39 AM


Mr Yeats,
if this is not poetry, I'll become the green eyed monster. Great write.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Wilfred Yeats
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Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
9 posted 2000-10-02 10:22 AM


Karilea-

I posted an excerpt for you in the Prose forum - hope it meets with your approval - far from finished - still in draft stage
Thank you

Paula-

to the rumble of the city streets? - would my dwelling were in Yosemite or Zion - even if I couldn't walk to the quicky mart drug store or supermarket. Thank you - your poems and words pleasure me as well

Martie-

My meandering mind eh? Hey - it's me  
Thank you    

Green Eyes-

as one of your devoted readers as well - I can only echo your words back to you - please keep wrting those inspiring words

Janet Marie-

Ooo wow - I can't tell you how much pleasure your words give me - glad you liked that verse - Thank you.

Nan -

Once I was only a night person - on automatic pilot each AM for literally hours
Of late  an AM person as well - (but now take mid-day naps LOL) - Thanks  

Liz -

It IS a gift - Isn't it? Thanks  

Kethry-

Perhaps a year from now - I may rewrite- and repost - I hope you're around to critique  

Thank you.

Sunnyone
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10 posted 2000-10-02 10:48 AM



Oh, this is really spectacular!! How I love the mornings, and having a fresh start on a brand new day.  It sounds as if your mornings are peaceful......thank you for giving me a glimpse into your day!!  


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Corinne
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state of confusion
11 posted 2000-10-03 09:16 AM


I turn to the window, watch squirrels and birds
Hear him sing on a branch proclaiming his love
See her scamper the phone wires
Wary eyes look at me, does she pity me here?
Confined inside and to the ground? - I have often thought this myself, that they are the lucky ones, their houses are provided, plenty of food, they do have to defend their territories, but other than that, they are free and we have become imprisoned by modern trappings of life.

Well said!

Corinne

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