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Angel Of Mine
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Angel Of Mine |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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angel of mine, please don't cry it tears my heart in two i wanted to take a moment to say some words to you you are the love of my life my friend and forever soul mate and we will make it through this all the confusion and hate together we are unstoppable apart we'll be alone with you is where i belong your heart, my haven and home people say what we are doing is wrong and that we'll pay the cost all i know is without you forever i'd be lost i don't buy into their lies and cruel harmful ways all i know is i love you and forever with you i want to spend my days i don't have the answers to our future i don't even know about tommorrow all i know is if i walk away my heart will be full of sorrow so beside you i will stand just waiting for a brighter day quietly i will hold your hand and let God lead the way no matter what you think in love with you i will always be never shall i leave you in time this you will see the road is going to get harder and the winter will be cold but with you i will be together we'll grow old. "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Boy does this one strike home!!!! Excellent pouring of emotion and strength in conviction in this entire piece. May I borrow it to share with someone? I think you have said it as good as I could ever say it. Thank you for penning my thoughts for me!!!! Superb writing and equally on the timing as well. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Aimster, Wow.. Have you been looking in on my life? lol. This poem couldn't have better timing.. I also have to show this to someone. Thank you for posting this wonderful poem of hope  |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
oh, what beautiful sentiments! a great dedication and "mission statement" for the future. "the road is going to get harder and the winter will be cold but with you i will be" indeed... well penned. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"so beside you i will stand just waiting for a brighter day quietly i will hold your hand and let God lead the way" Powerfully written Amy! It's so nice to have you back! Wonderful conviction toward future happiness, wherever or whatever obstacles may cross your path ... very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ This is a heart-felt write and I was reminded of the saying - 'If loving you is wrong - I don't wanna be right.' *Hugs* to you, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Angel of mine". I Love those words...we all need a special angel in our lives...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, a proud declaration. . . you can do it. . . I know that you can. . . Excellent poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
awww you guys are too sweet!! mark~so glad you liked. sure you can share this piece...i'd be honored. rosepetal~who me.....snooping? neva! lol okay maybe a little hehe. thanks for the kind words. ethan~thanks for the lovely words you wrote about my piece. so glad you liked. kit~its GR8888 to be back! i have missed this place so much. recieving a compliment from you is something I hold with high regard. thank you marge~the saying you picked out fits this poem and how i feel perfectly. i dont wanna be right  thanks gal for always supporting me. means the world. sven~you're such a sweetie. thanks for your support and understanding. i am such a big admirer of your work and i always smile knowing you read mine. thank you. love you guys! ~amy~ "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YEPPERS!!!! this is what I wanna hear ... determined and on track ... together you two can move all the roadblocks I know you can make this happen. written in the stars me thinks goforit amy-gator love ya girlie me |
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