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green-eyed monster |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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'flick' is the monster that lives in my head comes out when he's hungry and needs to be fed he'll sit on my shoulder and whisper his lies making me doubt and request alibis "who has he talked to... where has he been..." i feel like a jealous teenager again so i just won't listen i'll ask him to go but he'll just ignore me keep lying and so... flick... goes the green-eyed monster -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
y'mean little green-eyed monster, don't you? Cute, loved it! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
sunshine- YES! thank you.  i knew something wasn't right here...lol. thanks for the correction...have adjusted accordingly.  glad you like this one. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
....no words right now...just wanted to let you know i hear you.. hugs, me.. theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- thanks for listening...and hearing...i knew you would. what can i say...justkinda jumped out of my pen last night. thanks for understanding. love and hugs, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- just felt the need to send you another smile and a hug on this one. no harm, no foul. love you whole bunches- -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
everyday comes with a smile..you can take it and where it, or you can put it in your pocket.. today i'm tying mine on cause i dont want no monsters creepin' up on me tie yours on too tricks, cause whatever happens, happens..and.....love is a risk.. i'm not sure how much philisophical sense i'm making..its a bit abstract in the mind today..but, hey, at least its original work here! lol love and hugs, me theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Sending little green-eyed *Hugs* ! I loved this ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
his name is flick???? no kidding... hmmmmm well, no wonder, feeling jealous is so flicked-up.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- thanks for the smile...putting mine on right now. thanks for the pep-talk.you make perfect sense to me. loveyou bunches. ((((HUGS))))Marge- **HUGS** back to you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed this. Doreen- Yep...that's his name alright! I asked him just before I sent him flying...lol. ...'flicked up'...lol...i like that. thanks for reading...glad you enjoyed. Love you all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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