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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
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MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-09-30 02:34 AM


I'll Just Call You...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I don't tell you everything
that's going on with me,
but still you see things
my other friends don't see.
You know what i'm going to say
before it even comes out.
You can always tell how I feel
and your an expert at making me pout.
You can answer all my questions
(not that you do)
before i even ask.
I've did a lot of things wrong
but you keep it in the past.
(sometimes)
No one knows the extent
of the things we have been through.
No one understands
how much I care about you.
You know me better than anyone.
Sometimes even better then me.
You know everything I want,
how I think that things should be.
My heart is in your hands,
just where it's always been.
So till the day we meet
(and we will)
I'll just call you my very special friend.
(don't think ur girl would like
it if i called you my man)


© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2000-09-30 03:58 AM


I do certainly like this one. It can be wonderful, and indeed sometimes scary, when one knows you so well. It is especially difficult in the situation you portray here.

**************************
My heart is in your hands,
just where it's always been.
So till the day we meet
(and we will)
I'll just call you my very special friend.
************************

Great writing, I love it!



"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-09-30 08:42 AM


This is wonderful! Maybe treasure this one away for that special day!

Best of luck to ya!

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-09-30 08:47 AM


Very nice...James
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-09-30 12:13 PM


this is very nice. sounds like a tough situation you are in. i too once was in this exact place (not too long ago). just go with your heart, and treasure the friendship for what it is. and if it's meant to be it will be   take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-09-30 07:43 PM


Hello!

Welcome back. . . it's been a while since I've seen you post here. . .

This is an excellent poem. . . this kind of situation is always confusing. . .

Well done. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
6 posted 2000-10-01 12:24 PM


Thanks guyz...its a very tough situation thatnks for the good luck im sure ill need it. nice to see you to sven!!! missed you all
Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
7 posted 2000-10-02 02:33 PM


Hi just-another-fe,

Wonderful hope here and I wish only the best to come your way.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
8 posted 2000-10-06 12:32 PM


Wonderful piece, Just! I wish you luck in the future! Take care and peace!

Nathan

snowpants
Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
9 posted 2000-10-07 12:06 PM


Wow!  The last line caught me by surprise!  Excellent write!

sp  

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

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