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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-09-28 12:42 PM



Temptations and wants I must give up,
If I am to be accepted up above,
Caring for others I must heed,
If I am to earn my good deeds,
Patience is what I must capture,
Showing him that  my faith is not ruptured,
Sins of the past I must accept,
If I choose to lead a life full of success,
Faith in god I will gladly place,
For he is the one who holds my life lace,
Apathy is not what I must feel,
For in heaven all my wounds will heal.


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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1 posted 2000-09-28 01:48 AM


Ahh..A radiation of truth

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2 posted 2000-09-28 08:18 AM


Xeonox, good to see you again!  This is lovely, full of good truths...pop in to Spiritual Forum sometime...everyone there who don't come here would certainly enjoy just this type of message...
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3 posted 2000-09-28 08:30 AM


Xeonox,
Enjoyed, follow this and you'll find the yellow brick road.

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4 posted 2000-09-28 09:18 AM


Xeonox, this is beautiful.
Peace~ to you  


...chanson~

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Xeonox
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5 posted 2000-09-29 12:26 PM


I thank you for your lovely responses. Thank you all for remembering me.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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6 posted 2000-09-30 07:54 PM


beautiful thoughts... loved it.  

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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7 posted 2000-09-30 09:14 PM


A lovely message to share, especially the last lines. Thank you.
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