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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-09-25 07:06 AM


“I used to love you,” -- he said sadly,
“My heartbeat raced, when in my sight,
You had appeared. I loved you madly,
But all my dreams have burned in flight.”

“You’re such a liar,” -- she said softly,
“The words you utter aren’t real.
The love that’s true is always lofty;
Love never ends... I love you still.”




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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-09-27 12:17 PM


A love that's true never ends. How true these words are!

Right to the point!

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

Waverly917
Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90
Hugo, MN
2 posted 2000-09-28 02:21 PM


I agree, so true so true.  If it was really love, it never actually ends.  

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live
our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

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