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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~Just You~ Some need a knight on a white horse swept away on a high and grassy hill Some need a lover, a secret someone carried to new heights, sight unseen Some need a flower, forsaken at the door broken dreams, a heart to bleed Some need a rose, to bury in winter snow a seed of hope, to hold again in spring Some need bittersweet dreams a razor to cut into lonely nights I just need you... BloomingRose |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very sweet...concise...complete...well done! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
How could there ever be the thought of anything else??? Wonderful penning as usual and well you said it just as it should be. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful. . . just wonderful. . . A woman who knows what she wants. . . excellent my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sunshine, Thanks  Mark, Smiles for you, my friend Sven, Thanks, glad you like |
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