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Celeste McBride
New Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 3
cape despair

0 posted 2000-09-24 09:27 PM

I left you breathless
hopeless
winded from a marathon
that never ended

I want you back
from this story with no end
God knows I would
were the ending any different

but I'm not supposed to
or want to
I'm supposed to play like an adult
where no-one cries
and no-one feels

I want to cross these hurdles
between us
in limitless leaps
of fearless faith
and just remind you
I love you
and I always have

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2000-09-24 09:31 PM

Welcome to Passions!
a fantastic entrance. very Olympic-esque. i liked the words "limitless leaps of fearless faith". very eloquent and beautiful. also a nice promise of works to come.

i hope you enjoy your stay here at Passions. the bellhop will arrive in a moment to check your bags!

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-09-24 09:40 PM

Celeste~
Welcome to the Passion Suites ...
(loved Ethan's welcome)

These are very timely thoughts you've presented.
Enjoyed the Olympic-related terms for sure.
All in all ... enjoyed the entire poem.
Very cleverly done.
Look forward to more.
Enjoy your stay ... and enjoy the fine talent here.
LOTS and LOTS to read.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

chinaman
Junior Member

since 2000-08-26

Posts 17

3 posted 2000-09-24 09:41 PM

Strange but interesting way to go for the one you love!!

Celeste McBride
New Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 3
cape despair

4 posted 2000-09-24 11:07 PM

hi
thanks alot for your warm welcomes.
I can't wait to see what this place has to offer. And as for my poem, I hope someday to win him back, I just don't know how.

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

5 posted 2000-09-24 11:39 PM

Great writing! The title really caught my eye and I'm glad it did. Welcome to Passions!

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

6 posted 2000-09-25 12:50 PM

great entrance....welcome to Passions...your home away from home...(so to speak)
We all truly hope you enjoy your time spent with us (as much as possible we hope..)
take care

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2000-09-25 04:31 PM

Celeste,
Welcome to passions, anything we can do to make your stay more comfortable, don't hesitate to ask. Room service will be available so you never have to leave your keyboard. btw excellent write.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

8 posted 2000-09-26 01:58 AM

Welcome
That was an amazing write. I hope too that you win him back..Good luck sweetie.
BirdeeB

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2000-09-27 12:32 PM

I want to cross these hurdles
between us
in limitless leaps
of fearless faith
and just remind you
I love you
and I always have

I know that you can hurdle over all those obstacles if you want to and I will cheer you all the way. WELCOME TO PASSIONS and hope you stay around for a LONG LONG time.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

10 posted 2000-09-27 01:01 PM

Celeste

Welcome to Passions, where all women are safe from rascally scalawag men as long as they trust only me. I like the alliteration you used in this poem. It makes it flow smoothly along to the really great finish. You can trust the women, too. They are all very sweet and supportive. They've had a lot of practice because Toerag and Balladeer have left them swooning once too often.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2000-09-27 02:49 PM

Hi Celeste, quite a nice poem, and I understand so well the need to reunite with someone you never stopped loving. Good luck.
Sandra

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2000-09-27 03:49 PM

I particularly like the last verse... (Okay, so I am one of the swooners *G*) Welcome to Passions!

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