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New Year's Celebration-Mark's Challenge |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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NEW YEAR'S CELEBRATION Ring Out the old ring in the new for friendships start with not much ado. Now nothing ventured a one thing gained, the time has come be unrestrained. The party's here so let's All share, kisses and wishes rain in the air. The New Year comes let all praises sing, and let the bells go ding dong ding "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kethry- this is great! so creative...i love it.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Keth..this is SO COOL... VERY CREATIVE... and the colors make the perfect impact love the hope and promise of the poem ... Marks gonna love this... later-ring-my-bell-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Isn't it just the greatest fun to paint with words ??? This is very, very well done. You've got it going on ! Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Great image...great poem! This is a fantastic challenge...brings out the artist in a poet |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well Kethry....I had NO doubt at all that you would ring OUR bells with your entry when I saw you had accepted and you did that and so much more. The verse alone is wonderful but the way you paint the image to fit in with them is so PERFECT....you do have it goin on girl. Must be something in the air down there. Thank you so much for accepting and Chiming in with such a superb piece. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Kethry, Wowwwwww.... I am in awe...lol. And I had trouble with the diamonds..lol Very very impressive.. not only the picture but the writing as well.. it flowed wonderfully  rp25 |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very creative.......and what perfect shape....you would win the gold in the "bell" olympics...... Jenn E |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Fantastic! Perfectly shaped. I like it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks for your kind responses everyone. At first I didn't think I could do it. Then I did and I was pleased with the result. It's a effective way of writing that's for sure. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Kethry - now there you go again, mentioning Toerag but not 'Deer and I. This is gettin' frustrating! What's that? You didn't mention Toerag? Sure you did, in that last line - see it? Ding dong - I really like the poem, and the way you made it look like an airplane. That was really cool - lol. Seriously, though - I can see that you really worked on this poem, and your presentation was excellent. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
adding to my file as it should be |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LJ you are too much. Thanks. Mark thanks. I' m going to try a butterfly but it's still a chrysallis at this stage. Thanks for encouraging me in this type of work. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
your willingness to come back to these poetic structures indicates a level of masochism - I won't repeat - but you do it so beautifully - I will keep reading |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Perfection! What a read. Beautiful art work and clever and bubbly wording. You're awesome. Take care K. *Peace. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wil, thanks for your promise to keep reading. Fire, so glad to see you back! *HuGS* Kethry |
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