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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
SHE CRIES Forced to be something she is not, She smiles when she's sad, afraid to be caught. Can't let them see the tears within, For once they start they will not end. As she waits she slowly dies. Her tears are suppressed, but inside she cries. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So many bittersweet feelings are expressed here - in so few words... You've said it well, angel girl. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~The lines in this stay with me long after reading. Very affective writing. Do take care. *Peace. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent angel girl. . . don't let them win my friend. . . strength to you. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you have spoken a truth and wisdom very succinctly... thank you for your poetry  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~angel eyes heartbreakingly beautiful!! i loved this piece more than i can express. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Thank you everyone for your replies. It has been a really tough time lately. Angel |
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