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Perfect Trust

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 06-10-2000 03:16 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

I want nothing less than perfect trust--
the meet of eyes in understanding,
smiles, to share a joke in blush,
(fingers yearn a hand in holding)
comfortable, in comfort, hush...

The feeling met, when he is there,
my missing half, I've met, aware,
to give myself without diminish--
I speak--he finishes my sentence--
Both, delighted and amazed.

Excitement--knowing that therein,
is no beginning and no end...
to have my passion be my friend,
with he in me, and I in him...


(Kind of rework/repost from JM's thread...thanx for inspiration m'twin...)
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 06-10-2000 03:38 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

that I might inspire anything in anyone
is thanks enough ...

when you find this dreamboat...
ask if hes got a brother..cousin... PUPPY
anything...warm with a hearbeat  
beautiful poem fo longing

(see the time) *sigh*
im gonna hurt someone when that alarm goes off a 5 ...
but who sleeps with a 3 am ache  
goodnite me sweet...
im off to try
jm
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2 posted 06-10-2000 05:46 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

a wonderful poem, I hope your request is granted for it is a simple thing to ask for yet so many people find it hard to do.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.


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Serenity~
Nice thoughts - nicely presented.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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Your "wants" are beautiful and true to your heart...may you receive all that you dream for!
 
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