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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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0 posted 2000-06-09 03:34 PM


Ecstacy
Amy M. Kennedy


Looking into your eyes, the passion of flames begin
Calling out your name, I feel the ecstasy within
Candle burning bright, heat becoming intense
Madly in love with you, I have no other defense

Your eyes undress me, as our hearts beat together
And then we begin to move, and I am swept away forever
Sweet surrender I surely give to you
Your touch so soft, so honest, so true

In each other's arms how quickly time passes by
I've never known such happiness, I let out a sigh
Happiness soon turns to desire
And there is no extinguishing this blazing fire

Your sweet kiss falls softly on my lips
Our bodies becoming one, the movement of our hips
Higher and higher we begin to climb
Ecstasy consumes us, as heaven we do find

Heat takes over everything else, I want to feel your skin
If this is wrong, then loving you is my only sin
Once again I taste your sweet kiss
And am overcome with a feeling of sheer bliss

You now lay in my arms fast alseep
So beautiful, I don't dare speak
I run my fingers gently through your hair
Knowing I'm so lucky, to have found a love so rare


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 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."







[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-09-2000).]

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-09 04:06 PM


Passionate love at its helm...wonderful poem...

I loved this line..

" Heat takes over everything else, I want to feel your skin
If this is wrong, then loving you is my only sin "

Sincerely
A_L

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
2 posted 2000-06-09 04:08 PM


This poem burns with gdesire I think it may have fogged my csreen up lol
a wonderful romantic poem.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.



Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-06-09 06:40 PM


Oh WOW Amy, this is so beautiful so passionate. Loved it!   Well done.

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
4 posted 2000-06-09 07:40 PM


Oh Amy!  So sensual, so beautiful, so wonderful!  I'm yearning!
Good job.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-06-10 04:26 AM


A passionate and beautiful poem Amy !
First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

6 posted 2000-06-10 04:32 AM


Beautiful in every word......Left wanting more  

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-06-10 08:08 AM


CLOSE the curtains..we are all peeking!!
LOL
wow what can i say to this but
YOWZA!!
beautiful passionate poem amy-girl...
you better slow down or your gonna
spontainiously COMBUST!! LOL
later-sin-gator  
jm

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
8 posted 2000-06-10 08:15 AM


You've got some fire in those wings of yours Amy!!!  Wow...a very sensual and floating piece...I loved it!!!! Thank you for sharing this little beauty !!
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