How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #7 Archive
 Just Two Words
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Just Two Words

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 03-16-2000
Posts 5900
Lansing, MI USA


0 posted 06-08-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

lover's yearning
passion burning
lessons learning
heads turning

your eyes
love's guise
hidden surprise
no good-byes

your heart
missing part
new start
feelings impart

carnal desire
both admire
we tire
extinguishing fire

your touch
too much
life's such
loving bunch

we begin
enter in
i grin
pleasure wins




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
Member Elite
since 05-06-2000
Posts 3084


1 posted 06-08-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Wolf, I have 1 word 4 your 2 word verse ...
W O N D E R F U L
Coco  
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 04-19-2000
Posts 2428


2 posted 06-08-2000 10:22 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~LW,...oh this takes the cake. The title??? superb...the content...your talent...mmm,,...superb as well.  So well done. Aside from that....I think I am reading into an event that has taken place that may have been a bit painful????  Kick me if I'm wrong. hehe.  Take care you. *Peace.
Tennessee Angel
Senior Member
since 06-03-2000
Posts 667
Tennessee


3 posted 06-08-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

Lone Wolf --  This is phenomenal!  The title intrigued me.  I don't know how I almost missed it.  Precise and to the point.  No use in wasting precious words, right?  

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 11-06-1999
Posts 43042
Florida's Foreverly Shores


4 posted 06-09-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneWolf~

You rock
You roll
I read
I scroll

I like
I do
You rock
YOU DO !

*Girl ... this one is brilliantly creative.
I might just have a go at it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


5 posted 06-09-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

fan the fire
feel my desire
flames reach higher

kiss me once
kiss me twice
take me to paradise


heat with in
under the skin
taste this sin...


OK Ill stop or we'll have to go to adult LOL

way cool poem LW
nice with spice
later-hot- gator  
jm

Sudhir Iyer
Member Rara Avis
since 04-26-2000
Posts 7206
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


6 posted 06-09-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Lone Wolf,
is cool,
is true,
poet wonderful.

Two words,
Of love,
Of Pleasure,
Like Treasure
.....

Ok, enough of tom foolery from me, I am no good at this, so I simply stick around to saying that this one is a good poem, very unique and a brilliant idea...

Many regards, sudhir.
Back to the closet of pink floyd...

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 03-07-2000
Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


7 posted 06-09-2000 03:48 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

You can say alot with just two words, great work!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


netswan
Senior Member
since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


8 posted 06-09-2000 06:15 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wow Lonewolf. This was cool -- Well done

~netswan
Jeffrey Carter
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 04-08-2000
Posts 2424
State of constant confusion!


9 posted 06-09-2000 06:51 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Lone Wolf,
Very kewl poem m'friend

Sorry, I haven't caught you on ICQ in a couple days, I've been a bit under the weather  
feeling a little better now though

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 08-04-99
Posts 10270


10 posted 06-09-2000 07:10 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey LW, this is sooooooo Kewl sooooo creative and sooooo fantastic!!  loved it.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


tracie66
Member Elite
since 01-18-2000
Posts 4587
Victoria, Australia


11 posted 06-09-2000 09:31 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

LW~
well worded
your poem
of two

brought the
best out
in you

GREAT  
TC~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-09-2000).]
amazon_lover
Member
since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


12 posted 06-09-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

beautiful poem
two words!!!!!!
Aimster
Member Elite
since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


13 posted 06-09-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

LW~
Your two words sure do say A LOT.
I LOVED this poem!! You write with
such deep expression with just a few
lines...amazing. did i mention, i really
loved this poem?! lol. take care my
friend.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Colin
Senior Member
since 06-05-99
Posts 612
Callington, Cornwall, England


14 posted 06-09-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Two words:
Well done!

Eric
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


15 posted 06-09-2000 12:46 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

LW, your a Lady of few words.  Two will do!
~~very nice writing~~
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 02-02-2000
Posts 28839


16 posted 06-09-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

You write.
I grin...
nuff said?
Do again...
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 03-16-2000
Posts 5900
Lansing, MI USA


17 posted 06-10-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Thank you to all who took the time to read and reply to my two words.  I am very touched by the response I got from this one.  Special thanks to Marge and JM for their replies...you two are the best!!  

Serenity...will do, but I think I am going to adult with JM!!  LOL  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Lone Wolf will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #7 >> Just Two Words Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors