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ParisGrl
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0 posted 06-06-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for ParisGrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ParisGrl

Crushed
Laura M. Wells

I gave you my heart and my soul, with you I felt complete and whole
You have taken my dreams and crushed them into bits
I know this isn't what you want but you have to do this for your own good
You don't know what you have done to me how you have crushed me
I miss the sheer bliss of your kiss
You don't know how many times a day I think of you it was all like a dream to good to be true
I thought what I wanted was for you to release me but it is not what I want you see
I don't know what I want anymore than you do, I know that in time this game will be through
I did not think the finish line would come into view so soon
You have my heart and my soul, you said you would never do anything to hurt me
Well you have you see
I gave you all that I am and now you throw that away because you say you want to protect me…from what?
If anything comes out of this please remember only this
I love you


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spiked
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1 posted 06-06-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

nice poem
Thank you,
Rich
netswan
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2 posted 06-06-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Such pain in this poem -- may it soon
pass.

~netswan
JamesMichael
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3 posted 06-08-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yes this is good writing Laura...and may you find the strength to still have hope and new dreams.   James
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 06-08-2000 07:08 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You have expressed yourself well in this verse Laura ... your anguish is felt strongly.  Very touching poem.

Best wishes,
/Kit
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5 posted 06-08-2000 10:12 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Laura~
such pain and sorrow expressed here.
you wrote from a place deep within. i
hope things get better for you   and
i hope that the person who has caused
you this pain realizes their mistake
and corrects it. take care!

amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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