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Untitled.. inspired by Severn's Challenge

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angelsamongus
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0 posted 05-29-2000 08:27 AM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus

Life's loves and losses tangled at her feet,
she takes three steps and falls back two.
She is less then poetry in motion
but she gets up, brushes off and stumbles through.

When her going seemed so useless;
she blindly walked her path,
Making more mistakes then victories,
often swallowing life's wrath.

Known for her many mistakes,
and cursed for them too.
She trudges on and on,
Smiling at her victories... a few
(she is "I")
5/29/00



[This message has been edited by angelsamongus (edited 05-29-2000).]
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1 posted 05-29-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lori~
Just perfect I think.
We must all learn to celebrate the victories, no matter how small we perceive them to be ... they add up !
The Challenge Forum is great for stirring the creative juices.
You more than met the challenge.
Nicely done.
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2 posted 05-29-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus

~Thanks Marge~ Your words mean alot!
~BLESSINGS~
Lori
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3 posted 05-29-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Challenge met!! I like this poem.  
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Angels - this is wonderful!

Known for her many mistakes,
and cursed for them too.
She trudges on and on,
Smiling at her victories... a few

I can really identify with this, and you may count your poem as one of your victories...

K
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5 posted 05-30-2000 05:14 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is Wonderful Angels, A challenge well met. Enjoyed the read.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
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6 posted 05-30-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus

~Poet de Vine~
Glad you liked it!
~Severn~
Thanks so much.. Glad you liked it.
~Dark Angel~
Happy you enjoyed it.
    
Lori
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I guess we all make mistakes and learn by them ... But I like the victories best

Rex
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Thank You Rex
~Lori~
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