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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Sanity Green bananas one time hang high pregnant. Frogs baked brick hard lie from rain to rain. Salmon jump falls up river fly and die. Insanity made sane. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Amazing flow and rhythm, insanity made sanity, excellent. Green bananas one time hang high pregnant. Frogs baked brick hard lie from rain to rain. Salmon jump falls up river fly and die. Insanity made sane. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Very interestingly cool read here. *Right on. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Darling, you really should not stay out in this searing heat so long without a hat. Paranoiac delusions can occur.  *actually, I'm intriqued by the way your mind rambles ... pregnant green bananas petrified frogs dead salmon and sanity Yep, makes sense to me. But I was just out in the sun also. Love you ... honestly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brian, Thanks for the excellent. SpitFire, Thanks for the cool. Marge, Glad it made sense, I was worried. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
We humans do a lot of things that make a whole lot less sense than swimming up a waterfall. I liked your poem, short and well written, and always with a great deal to say Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HUH? just kidding...  deep deep -- you are. whos to say whats crazy and whats just the way it is..."JUST because"... dont ask me...Im LOONEY TUNEY LOL cool poem Sy-Guy later-poet-gator jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There is a rhyme and reason to it all. Sometimes on first glance it just doesn't seem that way. Great poem, Sy! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Glad you enjoyed the minimal subliminal. Love Sy Janet, You are a happy camper. Thank you.*L* Denise, Thank you for the great. *L* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oooh, you just inspired a thought that might inspire a poem that might inspire posting! Beautiful insanity, gorgeous images! Corinne |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy - I love this new exploration of yours...and this is a gem! Hugs K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, You are the nymph of passions. Thank you. *L* Severn, Thank to so much. *L* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you been going to creative writing class or something? geez... it gets better and better... reminds me of beat generation stuff your the poetman.. no doubt enjoyed much |
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