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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2000-05-22 03:01 AM


Okay, NOW I'm going to bed.

Mike

-final say-
That's the past.
I learned what I needed to;
I refuse to live it.

It's so much easier to fall back than spring ahead.
But time isn't savings when your daylight is clouded away.

That's my final say.


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-05-22 03:16 AM


I certainly hope NOT.
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2000-05-22 08:34 AM


That's the past.
I learned what I needed to;
I refuse to live it.
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But time isn't savings when your daylight is clouded away.
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and isnt it inspiring to clear our head and heart of those things that steal the sunshine in our day.

my how wise you are, even while sunburned *smile*
later poet-genius
jm/bs


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~



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